OBW Part 73: From One Mad Dragon... by RedPhantom
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One of the soldiers tries to mistreat Sapphire while Pt'this is with Shunati. Remtani stops it and takes Sapphire back to where Andy was. Drepal sees it and steps in. She insults Remtani who loses his temper and attacks her. Before he hurts her he sees it's actually Ann and realizes his sister is Drepal.
Comments (4)
bucyjoe
good job I listened to this by clicking read aloud and added reverb! I think these narratives are too long for this audience
ikke.evc
Great story and illustration, it was quiet a read, but i had time to kill. Like that you put a joke at the end. Well done, RP!
Wolfenshire
I like the way you always lean heavily on dialog to advance the story, it's a difficult technique to get right, but you do it naturally. Well done story.
eekdog
Lots to read. Great job on art.