Lolita by paul_gormley
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Lolita
Dolores was really excited to get a summer job at Mr Waterhill's ranch, especially one where she could take care of the horses and ride them too.
Mr Waterhill was a billionaire. He'd had to retire early from Wall Street owing to some affliction called ephebophillia, whatever that was, although Dolores thought it might be to do with vitamin D deficiency as Mr Waterhill always seemed to be sun bathing au naturel.
In spite of his affliction he seemed quite fit and healthy, had a pleasant smile and what's more was said to give bonuses for good service.
There were several girls of Dolores's age at the ranch and she found herself an unlikely participant in an unspoken competition to gain favour with the boss.
She dismounted Blue, her favourite stallion, and tried to smile as Mr Waterhill approached to inspect the stables — he was said to be very hands on.
She found herself licking her lips in nervous anticipation at her first inspection and then blushed deeply as she realised the top button of her pants had sprung open when dismounting.
Oh no! She thought, will Mr Waterhill be offended?
Jenna skin texture by Freja
Sexy Top VII by 3D-Age
Twin Hair by fabiana
Cow Girl3 by Hongyu
Horse Tack by Willsmind
Platform:
MacBookAir6,2 i7, 2core 1processor, 8GBram
Comments (12)
Richardphotos
great expression and render
quietrob
The subject title is both provocative and interesting. It immediately brings to mind, both the old movies of the same name starring James Mason and more recently Jeremy Irons. Here the artist has chosen to include a narrative that is well written, grammatically correct and engaging. The age is subjective but perhaps a bit too careful. Understandable in these days of instant categorization and subsequent condemnation when comfort zones are pushed. The artist must remember the history of this tales and be bold. Neither film would be considered trash and neither would this piece be as well.
Technically all clothing and accessories such as the bracelet are superbly fitted. Nothing is awkward or out of place. The composition includes at the very basics, a girl and a horse. The horse's head is hidden but not his hind quarters. Did he miss a chance to show Lolita's tenderness toward animals? Again, it's subjective so no points are subtracted. However, the choice of the horse's color blended in a bit too much with her jacket and the tree due to the lack of contrast in a black and white render. With the color choice (or lack thereof), contrast is your friend.
"He found herself licking her lips in nervous anticipation at her first inspection and then blushed deeply as she realized the top button of her pants had sprung open when dismounting." With all due respect, her top button is shut tight and another subjective chance at unexpected tension was missed. Do you look at her engaging smile, youthful beauty or that button?
Enough nitpicking. 5 Stars not only for the piece...but for daring to be bold.
Full disclosure, I follow Paul and am a fan of his work.
ontar1
Beautiful character!
romangirl
Well written! Beautiful character! More to the story?
NobbyC
Super image!!!
starship64
Nicely done.
Kordouane
A beautiful black and white image attracts more attention, which makes it possible to focus on the text that tells the image well, good work
anitalee
Excellent
rto3d
sweeeet ;-)
fu-minn
She looks very lovely! The story is wonderful,too!
jmattatall
really works in B&W
crunch01
Very cute morph.. great expression, and story, composition superb.. but.. since you mentioned it in the story you "really" missed a chance.. not using one of the jean sets that could have had the button opened..