Cute Siren(updated!) by Wazzup8389
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I need advice. Why? Because I'm only 13 years old. Everyone please take 2 seconds to post a comment. I would appriciate it more then you can imagine! :-) My goal to make her lure you in. I just edited her eyes after some of this advice I will work on her expression next and her eyes.
Comments (5)
msebonyluv
Well you have a great artistic talent ready to enter into the world..compared to your last picture...this is much better...just smoothen out the bumps...and you got a winner.
Dash
you have improved from your first post, what you can do is change her eyes a little bit so she doesn't have that stare at nothing look, maybe looking at the camera as if she is inviting the viewer in, but for a young artist this is looking really good, don't give up :)
dragonfly2000
Pretty decent - she needs to look at viewer and have some expression - put a small mirror next to your computer and look at your own espression, a good place to start - good work so far!
queri
I'm sure you tried to make her smile and it was hideous. For expressions work with tiny changes, negative frowns, eyebrows up or down, lids blinking a little, I think you've done that already. Phonemes A and E can also give a face life. As can Wince-- just a bit. Doing good, hang in there.
lululee
Good going Drew. Your lighting is much better.Her hands are less distorted and your character has lured in more people this time. You are doing very well.