Episode 1: The Twins Plan to Help by WolaverJS

Digital Comics • Adventure • posted on Nov 17, 2020

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RodS has a serial that inspired me,... to meddle in his work! We talked about my ideas at some length and he said, "I like it! Let the fun begin!" Suddenly, I remembered Ras al Ghul in Gotham leaving a couple of his ninja thugs to deal with Batman so he could continue to destroy the city. Batman said, "I could take four of these guys." Ras answered, "As you wish," and two more appeared... RodS: "Let the fun begin!" Me: "As you wish!" MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! ------------------------------------------------------ This story begins here. The next episode is here. RodS serial, Breitlenger Jar, can be found here.

Comments (4)

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RodS

12:38PM | Wed, 18 November 2020

Looks like double-trouble is brewing for someone soon. Let the fun begin indeed!

The ladies are looking good, Jim! Looking forward to more!

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enigma-man

3:05PM | Fri, 11 December 2020

I think having a few more frames with your characters would make an easier read. All you would have to do is rotate a camera or cameras, change a few poses and make a few renders and your story would look more like a comic. Having made hundreds of comic panels and most are in my gallery, I know what I am talking about. Just a suggestion you might find useful or ignore if you so choose.

WolaverJS

4:05PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

I know more frames make for a better attention grab, I always think of a lot more complication than you suggest. I may well have improved by the next post you see.

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