Superb !

I'm not so sure of what you were trying to portray, but I find some things wrong with your image. First of all, God the Father would not appear as an old man because in eternity, there is no passage of time. You make Jesus, His son, appear with lesser stature and not His equal. Then you portray the Holy Spirit with almost feminine attributes, with a brown bird above His head. The Holy Spirit is always portrayed as a white dove in art. you might have been sincere in your image, but I think you could have done better. I'm not picking on you to be obnoxious, and I'm not criticizing, hopefully just clarifying.

Your feedback is welcome and I agree with all of your criticisms -- Actually, I am irreligious and believe that Jesus of Nazareth was a goodhearted and charismatic spiritual leader that suffered an unpleasant fate -- I don't believe that Jesus was the son of a god -- I don't believe in God -- I do love Biblical Stories and Characters -- Jesus was a character kit that I purchased here at Rendo -- I believe the real Jesus had attributes closer to those of people living in modern day Egypt -- It was my intent to emphasize that God was his Father, which is why I decided to make him larger and older -- I do agree that the Dove should be white and will use a white Dove in any future works