Kyna Page 023 - Switch by LyleAryn

DAZ|Studio • Comics/Cartoons • posted on Apr 09, 2021

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No, there's no pages missing. I'll be correcting page numbers in the next week, and creating a filler page, to bring this whole project up to a "print" standard. (Even though I'm not really planning on having it printed.) I still want to follow the standard. As it is, page 19 should be pages 20-21, being a two-page spread. I'll correct numbers in the gallery this week. I did a panel, and was a little stuck this week, until I realized I needed a transitional page to get me to it. So, here we are. It's a BIT rough - I need to figure out a better way to create curves to connect speech bubbles. But! Learn as I go. Next week will be tidying, as mentioned. I need to swap out placeholder text on previous pages. Maybe work on the next page. There's a skill I need to learn how to do for the page after that one, so I might just take the week off to learn it. (I need to create some opacity maps to make a dress look torn. Should be a challenge.) I hope you enjoy! Elu looks really good in that tight leather outfit, don't she? Wait until you see the outfit she'll be getting into next! ~~LA P.S. Using freebies from Kalhh and Dryjack for this scene, as well as engelchen2009's folding screen. Look through their freebies - they go some good stuff!

Comments (18)

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12:25AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Well it's looking great!!! 👌

1:01AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thanks! They're going to try and pull the old "bait and switch" maneuver.

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1:00AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Most wonderful graphics novel page and superb art work and characters! Excellent creativity, my friend! Most excellent results!

1:02AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thanks, RRD! The story continues. A little sllwer, but I'm also writing a novel right now.

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1:50AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

She does look fantastic in that outfit! Nicely done.

12:54PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thanks!

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2:14AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

great layout and dialog - excellent

12:55PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thank you. It was nice to get another page done.

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3:21AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Another great job on this page !!

12:58PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thank you very much!

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4:56AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Simply fantastic! There are no words, beautiful story 👍🙋‍♂️

1:02PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thanks! I hope the flirting isn't too heavy-handed.

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4:58AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Very good job. bravo

1:02PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thanks!

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6:44AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Nice work LyleAryn - good luck with the novel. Structure, structure, structure,,,,

1:09PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Indeed! Up to five chapters, and about 13k words for the month. I'll be making some art for it eventually.

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7:16AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Sweet job !

1:10PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thank you very much! Glad you're reading along.

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7:50AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Nicely done.

1:11PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thanks!

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8:22AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Still with you! This is good stuff!

Now where do we go from here?...

1:11PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Fight? Fight!

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eekdog Online Now!

11:25AM | Sat, 10 April 2021

interesting and greatly done.

1:12PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thank you, eekdog!

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2:59PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Super layout and dialog .excellent work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

6:31PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thank you!

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4:39PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Looking good indeed. It flows nicely, and your art style is perfect for this.

Oh, those fun bits of page numbering, re-numbering, re-arranging panels, adding fillers, and inserts to make things in the story flow a bit more smoothly... I know where you're coming from, my friend! Now you know why I have only 6 functional brain cells left.. LOL

6:32PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Thanks! It don't help that I'm stubborn about print numbering.

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9:50PM | Sat, 10 April 2021

Excellent

1:38AM | Sun, 11 April 2021

Thank you very much!

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3:55AM | Sun, 11 April 2021

Compulsive viewing here. I love what you've done!

4:52PM | Sun, 11 April 2021

Thank you. That's very kind! The next page is a little more complicated to setup the panel work, but as I was working on it, I realized I needed an intermediate page. I think this works for the story's pacing. At this point, looks like I'll be running longer than originally anticipated. (Not like RodS didn't warn me, lol.)

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9:37AM | Sun, 11 April 2021

beautifully sexy in her clothes, nice comic board

4:54PM | Sun, 11 April 2021

What is it about seeing a lady wearing your clothes that is so appealing? In any case, Kyna is definitely having some buttons pushed! Thanks for viewing/commenting!

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12:10AM | Mon, 12 April 2021

A fine tale and some really lovely graphics. A joy to view and to read.

12:30AM | Mon, 12 April 2021

Thanks! Next week's page should be a doozy. If I can figure out how to create some nice opacity maps.

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