Kyna Page 027 - Not the Princess by LyleAryn
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Woo! I got the fight sequence done. Four pages. I'm deciding whether I'll upload them all now, or one a week like I was doing. Hmm. I guess it goes give me some nice buffer...
Honestly, I probably could have gotten these done a lot sooner, but struggling through the blahs and everything else meant I was only doing a LITTLE bit of work at a time. Then I kept drawing blanks on the dialogue. Still not my strong suit for comic pages, but I'll roll with what I've got. I'm really used to novel writing, and it's quite different for comics. Now I understand why comics usually have kinda cringe-worthy dialogue.
So. Here's page 27. Once I get all four uploaded, that will put us up to page 30. If I were sticking to standard-issue format, that would leave me two more pages to wrap up the issue. COULD be, that's what I do. Could be I'll tack on a couple. Finding a good stop point for the "chapter" is an art all unto itself. Considering what I want to do with the other characters, I'll either need two really cramped pages, or just let it run a little overlong. Every page over, I need to run two pages to keep the number even.
Silly rules I make for myself.
I'm so glad to get the sequence done, because I'm sick of this dress. And the axe-wielder's tunic.Gah. I'll never use that prop again! I might use the dress again, but not for this sort of thing!
Now, you might notice the dress is shorter. Choppy. I wanted to show her cutting it off, but I decided you'd figure it out without going through a whole other page of motions. And building very complex opacity masks.
I'm thinking, once I get this "issue" done, of posting it to tapas. It would be nice to earn some fans.
Comments (12)
Tracesl
excellent
LyleAryn
Thanks!
miwi
You have created a wonderful picture story,excellent done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LyleAryn
Thanks! I'm in this for the long haul!
eekdog Online Now!
you do a professional job on this type of series.
LyleAryn
Thanks. I probably take it all together too seriously for my own good. (lol)
Radar_rad-dude
Excellent work. What will become of those poor saps? No one messes with 'the princess!'
LyleAryn
RodS
Oh, my..... Never call a woman with a sword like that "gutter trash." It's really hard to talk (or eat, or anything else) when your head is rolling around on the ground... Looking good here, sir! And I suspect the "princess" will make short work of these scallywags..
RE: Silly rules.... Yeah, I made some of those way back when.. About the 3rd page of Chapter Two, the rules thumbed their nose at me and jumped out the window! LOL
LyleAryn
I think the inner Adrian Monk in me needs for their to be some sort of order to things.
And yeah. Insulting the protagonist is usually a bad idea... Doubly so if they're a lady.
starship64
Nicely done!
LyleAryn
Thank you.
beachsidelegs
Wonderful :)
LyleAryn
Thanks, Beach. Hopefully the weather is inly pleasantly warm wherever you reside.
STEVIEUKWONDER
Yep! Adrian Monk would sort this lot! Excellent!
LyleAryn
Koala44
Nice work.
LyleAryn
Thank you very much my fractal-loving friend.
daggerwilldo
Hooray ... you are hitting on all cylinders !!! Stories and multi render projects can be really painful sometimes. But then, i have the attention span of a humming bird.
LyleAryn
I'll just charge it to your bill, then... ;)
chasfh
Catching up...
Very cool!
LyleAryn
Thank you!
ikke.evc
Like your comic. I tried some time ago some story, but i'm not disciplined enough to stay on course. So, well done!
LyleAryn
Yeah, that has been a challenge to overcome. I had to come up with a style I liked, but was also easy to do in a fairly short period of time. Not waiting hours on each render for a panel has helped immensely. Thank you.