Milly 62 by randalthor2
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Description
Every month
ever since he left her
she would light a candle
in her wake
and left it there to burn
it was a sign
of her ever-burning love
and hope
a year passed
with no news
two years
finally just as spring peeked
she discovered
a parchment left
under the rusty chandelier
her heart pounding
she peeled open
the charred paper
and slowly
deciphered the letters
stop trying
to burn down
the house
moron
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Umm, well okay some wise guy said that I should add a 'twist' to make a story interesting. Couldn't think of anything really. Maybe I should have stopped at '..the letters'...I don't know :-p Guess I'll need to work more on that.
On a different note (pardon the pun), someone suggested Milly's been having it easy and I should probably throw her into harm's way to get those lovely legs working. Seems like a good idea. So, umm, peril, peril, peril....I'll see what I can do :-}
The problem with such scenes is of course her expression, some of you probably know how I feel about G8's expressions hehe. Yes, it is somewhat difficult for me since I'm chronically fixated on making her look good all the time. But it's probably worth a shot. Probably.
Neeways, do pardon the rant. Me hopes you enjoys and do stay safe everyone.
Comments (14)
contedesfees
The eyes are particularly fine!
kharnes
Very well done
PhthaloBlue
Fantastic!
FurNose
I think, the only moron here is that stupid bloke who left such a goddess! I probably cold never forgive my self if I'd ever hurtet the feelings of such a beauty! BTW: I'm not mad about you making her always just looking stunning all the time, and yes, me too, have discovered, that giving a G8F-Character just a relaxed ( say neutral) expression lets her look best. If you have a stunning character, trying to make her smile mostly just distorts her face in a way, that ruins her appearance all together! So better stay with making Milly looking gorgeous (and I crazy love her dreaming look)
Paulienchen
gefällt mir ein schöner Render
jancas
Beautiful work
Saby55
Wow! Masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👍🙋♂️
Timm061
Love that story ending, started my morning with a laugh, thank you!
CATMANDO
Lovely character...
paul_gormley
the lighting really shows off the skin to advantage making it look super real, great image
JoeJarrah
Lovely composition and light, she rather suits the wan and wistful look.
The "Taking Heads" ending to the note gave me a laugh.... so now her "peril" will be fleeing a burning building??
jmattatall
very nice
Kilroy
Very nice work with this scene!
therat
Superb work!