Mab's Nemesis Van Artell by CoolDimension
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Character Profile
Van Artell is a young eighteen-year-old Cadet just being enrolled at Empire Star Academy. He is starting his semester late, because he was defeated in winning his planet's paid scholarship to the Academy by his fellow Tryonnian, Mab Elon! Van was forced to break-up with his girlfriend, Latara and was confined to his room for continual study as punishment for falling to defeat Mab Elon and win the planetary scholarship. Van aches for the love and tender kisses of his girl and blames Mab for his troubles! His father, who is dropping him off at the school's library, is berating Van once again for being second place to Mab and shaming the family. Van's father is furious that he now has to pay for the expensive academy and tells his son he will be spending all his spare time studying in this library and that he is not allowed any girlfriends on his "off days". Books and weights are now to be his only "love". Van's father tells him that he must be better than Mab at everything! Van has vowed to get revenge on Mab and is determined to win back his father's love and respect!
*********The StarBracer/ Cadet Mab SAGA****************
This saga is about StarBracer, a galactic super-powered hero who fights against the tyranny of Galactic overlord Evan Grell, who rules the Zytron empire with an Iron fist of cruelty.
Character profiles:
This is Mab Elon
MAB ELON at Empire Academy
Cadet Mab's girlfriend-Linara Brightheart
MAB ELON and LINARA BRIGHTHART
Mab's friend Tank Melton
Our saga begins with the story of a young, eighteen-year old cadet, Mab Elon, who is abducted from his military academy in the early evening and is to be brought to Overlord Evan Grell.
A Cadet's Story
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Comments (16)
starship64
This is fantastic work.
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate it!
mmitchell_houston
Very nice work with the body language. Your composition is strong (love the low POV). I really like your lighting choices for this; the strong light on the head and shoulders really help draw our eyes to their faces/heads. I like your painting effects, but there is something odd about the patterns. Have you tried toning down (decreasing the strength) of the bump maps? I think that might help enhance the illustrative quality you're working toward. Over all, this looks to be an exciting story. Best of luck with it.
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind comments! This piece has a lot of texture of the outfits, so it has more of a moire distortion. I will try out your suggestion in the future. I appreciate your kind comments and insight.
hashdoc
indeed, very strong body language!
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! Thanks for viewing and commenting!
Radar_rad-dude
A fine pair in turmoil! Too bad the father has to be such a self centered prick and not appreciate his son for who he is! The son is not a champion quarter horse or other prize animal to be trotted out to win prizes and fame for the father! He is a living human with all the emotions a human is capable of! Too bad his father is pushing him toward the dark side! Excellent character study possibilities here with this one! Your story is fleshing out quite nicely! Many fine praises from me on its continuation!
CoolDimension
Thank you so much for your kind comments and encouragement! Yes, his father is cruel. He knew depriving him of his girlfriend would really hurt him and he filled his son with shame for his "failures". Now Van blames Mab. He will be scheming to sabotage him and turn people against Mab.
nemesis74s
Poor boy... He would do better to tell his father and all of them to go to hell! 😅
CoolDimension
Thank you for commenting! I appreciate it! He isn't secure enough to do that. His Father is very strong and dominating and looks down on Mab because of his background. He thinks Van and his family are "superior". He has drilled this into his son.
uncollared
Fantastic posing and expression.
CoolDimension
Thank You for the kind comments!
Leije
Nice POV and poses !
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate it!
eekdog Online Now!
Magnificent character interactions.
CoolDimension
Thank you so very much!
RodS Online Now!
You've really done a great job with his exasperated and sad feelings as he gets berated yet again... Excellent work on this!
CoolDimension
Thank you so much, Rod. I appreciate your kind comments very much!
MeInOhio
Great image! The expressions mirror the story!
CoolDimension
Thank so much! I appreciate it!
Richardphotos
superb poses and expression. original story also
CoolDimension
Thank you for the kind comments! I appreciate it very much!
rayag
Very well done !
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate it!
Flint_Hawk
The son sure has a big burden to shoulder! What a shame that he isn't allowed to live his own life! You have portrayed all of this perfectly!
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! Yes, it is too much to live up to! I really appreciate your kind comments! Your work is always stunning!
Angela3D
Fantastic work!!
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate it!
bucyjoe
sounds like a solid start for his character
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate it!
APlusDesign
The expressions and posing is just perfect! can really feel his shame coming out here. Wonderfully done.
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I am really happy to hear that! My goal is to bring the characters to life. Thanks for viewing!