CUBES AND KINGS-PART 18-RIDER by CoolDimension
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Bay continues telling Mab the secret story of Cubes and Kings:
Savante Tas stood in the grand main room of the Uhrain castle with King Loam behind her. She scanned the area around her, searching for something....
"Wait! There is another Ancient One coming into this room!" Savante yelled. "Garen Yar, the knight errant who has been fighting against my plans! And there is another with much Ancient energies within! Who could it be......"
"SQUEAK! SQUEAK! SQUEAKKKKK!" came a cry that thundered through the huge castle room!
"NNOOOOOOO!" Savante Tas screamed in terror! "It's Tidbit the rat! Only he's a giant! And Garen Yar is riding on top of him!"
"Yes, your wickedness!" Garen Yar said.
He was perched high up on top of Tidbit's enormous back, like a rider on a horse.
"Your time of reckoning is at hand!" Garen Yar yelled as he gripped his blazing energy sword in his right hand. The sword crackled and cast a harsh red light on to everything!
"Squeak Squeak!" The giant-sized Tidbit cried as he stomped his feet in fury, sending a plume of dust into the air. The dust particles crackled and burned into a fine mist as it swirled around the swordsman's glowing red blade!
"No! Stay away!" King Loam screamed. "Keep that monster away from us! I don't want to be eaten by it!"
"How dare you, Garen!" Savante Tas hissed. "I command you to get that foul, disgusting Rat away from me!"
"Neither Tidbit or I take orders from you, Evil One!" Garen yelled. "And neither of you need fear Tidbit! He is a good soul and a beloved pet of King Olar! He isn't here to eat you or harm you! He is here as a witness!"
"A witness?!" Savante said with a chuckle. " A witness to what? Your stupidity? Your treason?!"
"No!" Garen retorted. "To the cruel and vicious things you have done to him!"
"Me?!" Savante said. "I haven't done anything to the beast! I was forced to watch him playing games and getting kisses and hugs from that young wall rat, king Olar! It is Tidbit that has harmed me! Just the sight of him makes my skin crawl!"
"Look at him! Does he look like he did when young Olar petted him and kissed his little pink nose? Does he look like the tiny baby rat that kept a boy hiding in a wall from total loneliness and despair! NO! He's been altered into this mutant... by YOU!" Garen Yelled.
"Liar!" Savante cried. "I never did anything to that rodent!"
"You Sent Lom Uhrain to strangle King Olar!" Garen said. "You were controlling him through his uniform, which was filled with cosmic power! Tidbit saved King Olar by biting and tearing the control uniform! He absorbed all that power and became a giant!"
"Lom failed?! NO!" Savante said. "Olar the Wall Rat escapes my wraith, again!"
"Lom? My brother?!" King Loam asked. "He's alive?!"
"Yes! Only because I regenerated his body!" Savante said with a smug smile. "What better assassin than Olar's precious friend who layed down his life for him all those years ago!"
"You did that to my brother?!!" King Loam yelled. "You desecrated his peace! His Sanctity! By all that is Holy, you must pay!"
"Silence, slave! You forget your place!" Savante snapped.
"Yes! Desecration!" Garen Yar said firmly. "Against animals and against nature itself! The most serious crimes an Ancient One can commit! Tidbit is the proof!"
Savante Tas merely rolled her eyes and waved her hand dismissively at Garen Yar.
"You know the penalty for these crimes!" Garen Yar said. "I evoke the powers of legend! Savante Tas, you are under arrest! You will tried by the High Council of Or! You will pay for what you have done!"
TO BE CONTINUED!
A Cadet's Story
PREVIOUS CHAPTER:
CUBES AND KINGS-PART 17-RECKONING
THIS CHAPTER:
THIRTY TWO: A TALE OF CUBES AND KINGS-PART 18-RIDER
Cadet Mab continues to tell Gamon Halt, The Overlord's right hand, why he believes he will soon be killed by the Overlord.
Bay continues telling Mab the story of Cubes and Kings.
(This part of the story is told in prose form)
*********The StarBracer/Cadet Mab saga****************
This saga is about StarBracer, a galactic super-powered hero who fights against the tyranny of Galactic overlord Evan Grell, who rules the Zytron empire with an Iron fist of cruelty.
Character profiles:
This is Mab Elon
MAB ELON at Empire Academy
Cadet Mab's girlfriend-Linara Brightheart
MAB ELON and LINARA BRIGHTHART
Mab's friend Tank Melton
Mab meets Tank Melton
Starbracer-AKA Tryon Khrys
STARBRACER
Galactic Overlord Evan Grell
Princess Zeltron and rebel leader Finnegan Black
Our saga begins with the story of a young, eighteen-year old cadet, Mab Elon, who is abducted from his military academy in the early evening and is to be brought to Overlord Evan Grell.
Chapter one: a Cadet's Story
**************thank you for Viewing!************
Comments (15)
Saby55
Beautiful composition!! really well done.👍🙋♂️
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate it!
starship64
This is wonderful work!
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! Thanks for viewing and commenting!
anahata.c
I'm coming in in the middle of your tale, but I can still get the conflict, the confrontation, and the battle of wills here. Strong confrontation between the rider and Savante. And a nice twist, as we realize that Savante may have done damage (which she denies). The giant rat at first almost strikes me as comic, but then becomes very serious as the dialogue unfolds. Your visual fits your chapter well, and you acheived an almost wood-cut look...The rat has a nice complex posture (facing one way, looking another) and that red glow from the sword makes the rider look like he is called from some higher source. (An excalibur-like weapon.) Well done, with a fine visual to match.
CoolDimension
Thank you so much for all your kind words and insightful comments! I appreciate you reading the story and commenting on the story and my art! I was greatly enriched by your comments!
uncollared
What is he feeding that rat?? LOL Very unique image
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! Tidbit got infused with cosmic energy! Your comment made me smile!
madame
Wow, impressive image... wonderful work !!
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate it!
APlusDesign
I just love the details in your story and render. Especially the giant rat in this one. :)
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! He's a really big rat, but a nice one! Thanks for viewing and commenting!:)
Radar_rad-dude
All the tense forces are coming together in this fine tale you are relating! I can't wait to see how you tie it all together! What a cliff hangar! Very well orchestrated my friend! Excellent illustrations as well! Many kudos from me!
CoolDimension
Your kind comments are so welcomed! Thank you so much!
eekdog
excellent done!
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate you viewing and commenting!
MeInOhio
Gret work! The rat really has expression!
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate it! I try to bring him to life!
RodS
Fantastic art and a gripping episode in the story! Superbly done!
CoolDimension
Thank you so much, Rod! I really appreciate it!
Richardphotos
very interesting story and superb render
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate it!
Rozsakert Online Now!
Well done. :)
CoolDimension
Thank you so very much! I appreciate it!
BellaDark
Awww I actually feel sorry for this little rat! Wonderful scene and story, and I love the postwork effects on the image. :)
CoolDimension
Thank you so much for the kind comments! I try and write a good story! I really appreciater your supportive remarks!
Flint_Hawk Online Now!
That's an amazing number of details in your well-illustrated story!
CoolDimension
Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind comments and your viewing and commenting!
daggerwilldo
Wonderful story line and one big Mousester !!!! Well done.
CoolDimension
Thanks so much for the kind comments! I appreciate it!