excellent

Thank you Tracesl.

Great job on this!

I'm happy you like it CoolDimension.

Very cool. Nice work

Thank you and I appreciate you commenting uncollared.

Just another morning before school at the Super Prep Club! I bet the school is happy to have someone as imposing as Nakia as a hall monitor! Fun groups of students making their way in (and making various kinds of mischief along the way)! I'm curious, though, why some of them are wearing uniforms and the others aren't? Do the uniforms apply only to the lower grades? Comic Life is an awesome app for putting together comic pages like this! Look forward to more :-)

Thank for the comment. Yes, Nakia takes her job seriously much to the chagrin of her classmates. 😉The faculty is happy for her assistance. When going over the story with Kimmy my better half we decided that the upperclassmen would be allowed for casual wear as opposed to the uniform you see the younger kids wearing. Nanako is Rebecca's transferred recently from Japan so out habit she still wears her high school uniform. I will most likely be buying Comic Life before my trial period ends.🙂

Wow this looks great. Nice story and flow, you did a good job with everything and that app I will have to check out!

Thank you so much. I tried to maintain a consistency with the separate renders. (Just need to work on the speech bubbles) I had been looking for a good app for making a comic and I noticed MollyFootman mentioned using it. They offer a free 30-day trial, so you definitely check it out.

Sweet work you did here, like it. I used Comic Life 3 on two of my pages of my last series. I like how it makes set up real easy. my trial period end, and I was not able to buy at this time... I do hope some time in the future.

Appreciate the feedback Diemamker. Your comic pages Always look amazing.

This is fun and a delightful page, my friend! Well done.

Putting a story together is a lot of fun, but it can get complicated, and be a real challenge at times. Trying to figure out what camera angles to use, where to put characters and how to pose them, what to put in and leave out in the background, etc, etc.

Ya did good! 😁

Gratitude RodS. I know it won't be easy, but I definitely want to continue this.

Nice work

Hey anitalee I appreciate the kind words and you taking the time to comment. 😁

Really entertaining first page! The flow from panel to panel makes sense and the dialogue scans well. These are basic skills that not everyone masters and I think you've got a good handle on it. I've been using Comic Life for years and am very satisfied with the results I can get although there are annoying limits. Have looked at a few other programs but they are either even more limited or a bit too steep in the learning curve for me to take on.

I enjoyed viewing and hope you will continue to share, my dear. I know very well that it's a lot of work to put together a nice page like this as opposed to single images. =)

Molly

Thanks Molly I've read comics for years but never really tried to do one. When I saw you mention the Comic Life in one of your posts that's when I decided to try it for myself. I appreciate your feedback and suggestions in my work.