An interesting action render. As I have commented in your other images, learn to use depth-of-field to isolate your main character. You want to convey a story but having everything in your image sharply focused becomes a distraction. Your lighting needs to be adjusted; the background indicates very harsh shadows while the main character is too well-lit. One last thing, her facial expression is too bland, very lifeless. Have the eyes looking anywhere else than down. Again, you are telling a story; make it convincing that the main character is urgently going somewhere of extreme importance.