Poem/Pic: Spiderweb by aingeal
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No, this has nothing to do with Spiderman, in case you were wondering :P
Wrote this poem about middle to end of last year. One of my friend's reactions to it: "There're so many ways to die in there..." ^^;
Anyway, the pic turned out fairly close to the mental image i had. Webs are a bit wobbly, i know ~.~
C&C welcome.
Comments (11)
Commander_18
cool, Just maybe make the Text bigger its kind of hard to read.
RTVprodux
Poetic noir, i like your approach...good one. (Rtv!)
aingeal
Thanks for the comments! heh, it's fun to walk on the dark side once in a while... Increased the font & did a little editing.
sygnin
It's a nice pic, but I hope it's not a personal reflection...
aingeal
laugh Don't worry, i'm not suicidal. Though the S'pore school system does tend to make one feel rather o_0 at times... ^o^ Most of my poems aren't actually based on myself.
KidAmnesiac
this another painting? its great anyhows! ARGH! i got AS levels tomoz - i feel ur pain lol
aingeal
Done in good ol' Photoshop :) All the best for tmr!
boundless
Sensational work!
aingeal
Thanks a lot! :)
grims
very nic e- but i find the text a bit hard to read.
twillis
Effective pic, but I agree about the text. Perhaps making it pale yellow or so there was a touch more contrast. Maybe you could find a more "despairing" font. The script font is almost too pretty. It might be interesting to try a scratchy looking font (almost as if the woman scratched it in the floor). Perhaps giving it a slight color that bled out to gray. Ah, just random thoughts. Feel free to tell me to go soak my head. Good pic.