Emerald-Eyed Smile by Iuvenis_Scriptor
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Description
A portrait of my developing G9 character that experiments with expressions and depth-of-field. Constructive critique, especially regarding photo-realism, is welcome as always. Thanks for viewing!
Comments (4)
CoolDimension
Wonderful expressive portrait!
adlersgp
i think you could improve the eyebrows massively. :)
hborre
I would assume that if you are referring to Superfly rendering then there are several aspects that you need to address to achieve that endpoint. The eyebrows and eyelashes need significant work. There is something quite not right with her teeth but I can't place my finger on it. Her eyes need additional tweaking and her skin appears to be lacking SSS. In addition, her skin looks too smooth, with no wrinkles or pores.
However, her smiling expressions aren't bad.
Iuvenis_Scriptor
Could you please be more specific about the eyebrows, eyes, and eyelashes?
hborre
The eyebrows are too thick and unnaturally tinted. If there is any specularity associated with it, which it appears to be in the image, it is applied too prominently. Eyebrows do not show significant reflective highlights.
Eyelashes should be thicker for a woman, a sensual look is what you should convey in female portraiture. I see a hint of glitter mixed in, was that intentional or is it an artifact from the Material Room?
I find the eyes too reflective to be truly realistic in a natural environment. The glossiness needs to be reduced or a different material set substituted. The pupils need prominent texturing and more saturated colors to accentuate them better.
Iuvenis_Scriptor
Thank you! That's very helpful!