I'll be watching you by poser4me
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Description
Since you've gone, I've been lost without a trace
I dream at night, I can only see your face
I look around, but it's you I can't replace
I feel so cold, and I long for your embrace
I keep crying, baby, baby please!
Song by Sting
Comments (12)
starship64
Fantastic work!
poser4me
Thanks.
Saby55
Spying on people is not nice 😄😄😄 Magnificent job!! 👍🙋♂️
poser4me
I know, I'm a bad boy. Thanks :-)
tetrasnake
Fantastic work. I have the song in my head though.
poser4me
LOL! I've started a new music playlist of Sting's music. Thanks
MollyFootman
Well... the song has always creeped me out a bit, seeming to me to be the ideas in the mind of a stalker. >.> This picture, too is really good but kind of creeps me out for the same reason. <.< The image of the intently staring eyes on the wall really adds a lot to the overall feeling that she is being watched and (for me anyway) the creepiness of the image. Don't get me wrong, creepy is not a bad thing; strong images aren't always Pollyanna cheerful. This is a very good image!
One thing I might have done differently were it my image is go to the portrait perspective instead of landscape and pulled in a bit closer. The shrubbery and brick exterior of the building is fine but I think the point of the image is the shadow of the unseen watcher and the subject of their spying.
Thanks for sharing, this is a really densely layered image that was very enjoyable to view!
Molly
poser4me
You're right your suggestion of a closer view of the eyes and the subject was my original plan. But a funny thing happened on the to rendering the scene. More and more ideas started to flow and thought it better to show a multi layer viewing point. Yes I was creeped out and struggled with this scene. I really don't like this scene yet I shared it to get others opinion. Thank you for your honeset feedback, it's nice to know someone will share such.
MollyFootman
Please understand that something so powerful and well done was really good to share and I enjoyed viewing it. That being said... creeps me out a bit! ;-)
Molly
MajinBoo Online Now!
Not much I can add that Molly hasn't already said but this is a fantastic composition. There's something about songs that are basically just someone stalking someone that sound good and have a great beat but when you really listen to the lyrics "Yikes". One of personal favorites is "Seven" by Tijuana Sweethearts loved the song when I first heard but reading the lyrics while doing karaoke to it. I was like this woman needs to be arrested. The subject matter isn't a reflection of you as a person, but the fact is that there are people out there who do this is disturbing. Thanks for sharing.
poser4me
Hey thanks Majinboo, I appreciate you. This is true about songs. I love the song Pumped up kicks by Foster the people and thought about doing a scene but the subject matter is too much with whats going on in this country I think.
uncollared
Looks very stalkerish. Cool, and creepy image
poser4me
Thanks!
jdwtrxk Online Now!
Like the contrasting lights which set the POV
poser4me
Thank you so much!
OmniFX
The lighting and atmosphere are very nicely done. Another problem is depending on where the house is sitting, you should always have some kind of shade or curtains drawn for the bedroom sitting on the ground floor and especially at night. This shadow person could be walking down the sidewalk. Some people are oblivious to who may be out there. Definitely need more facts. Great job!
poser4me
Thank you, I was going to put shades but opted not to keep the scene pretty simple and straight forward.
RodS
I really do like the creepy-esq feel of this - it's quite effective with the shadow of the watcher. Also can't add much the Molly hasn't, but I really like this work!
poser4me
Thank you thank you.
Steff_7
Superb creep factor and comp. Love this and fave :)
poser4me
Thank you so much!
Stormrider75
Hi, not only the threatening outside but also in the apartment.
Great work :)
Greets Stormrider75
poser4me
LOL! Thank you so much!