thou and I, my friend, can, in the most flunkey world, make, each of us, one non-flunkey, one hero, if we like: that will be two to begin with.
Deep within the inner mind
There dwells a place to fantasize
Around it grows a darkened gloom
within it lies a special room
Padded walls and tiled halls
softly murmured voices from each cell
come the calls gibberish and noises
And so you've come, to see about
the oddity that has no doubt
a lovely woman, perhaps indeed
a shattered mind, you'll soon see
I dwell therein, a poser loon
with writing as a craft
I will escape, oh yes, quite soon
to Diaper Island I will Journey
From twig of broom I've built a raft
And on it placed my gurney
So who am I, I hear you ask
with poem bad in rhyme no less
meter mangled, rhythm strangled
I am a simple dark skinned lass
Whose life is never quite at rest
I come here often, rarely stay
I find it's better, quite, that way
Too many voices drown the chorus
And I'm needy, whiny, porous
But still I do, when in the mood
For old time sake and freebie food
So now you know a little bit About the twit that's me...
There are many mysteries, many unanswerable questions, even in lives as short as ours...
... for Life begins when you begin to think
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Comments (7)
mondoxjake
Nice job on the texturing..unusual portrait. If the eyes looked a bit more natural and didn't have a painted look this one would be great.
queri
Good to see your work-- I think. I had that kind of day yesterday, expect it again tomorrow.
ynsaen
Thank you, both of you! I liked this one enough to post it, but I'll likely go back and rework it a bt and then use her in a setting piece. Thanks for the comments on the eyes -- I had wanted to get a rather "glowing" effect, but failed on this attempt. The texturing is way too simple: P5 material lab and the base color of the model. The only texture maps in there are the Killysuit and the hair. All i did otherwise was add in some turbulence to the extreme. I think I' will get in there and have a bit of fun with this one... Been a year since I last posted. Figured I was about due again... lol
tralfaz
Ouch, interesting work with textures. If you are using P5 try adding a translucent color to the eyes and they will glow. Nice work.
maciek
You can also make them glow by adding lens flare effect in photoshop during postwork. Nice job, little spooky, dough.
Dejah
Ok, now I will not go and take a look in the mirror, I so feel like that, what if I look like that too....:p
nikita_s_cold
...gah. Are you O.K.? It just makes me sad. You didn't get burned, did you? I did; not like this, but it sucks. My scars are barely noticeable; you wouldn't know it if I didn't tell you. But it's the nightmare of surviving. I can't say much here, Ynsaen, except you got the emotional scars right.