Fly by elzoejam
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marcopol
It's a nice evocation of Titanic. I find it unfortunate that the gestures of the couple in the foreground interfere too much in an involuntary and comical way with the characters in the background: the left hand of the woman in the face of the other woman, the right arm which hides the face of the another man, the man's forearm which becomes the hidden leg of the second, pigeon which lands on the man's head; and this despite the very short depth of field. This saturation of the space by the details that are supposed to give life to the scene, clutters it. I think the solution would involve a slight panning, to place this attractive couple three-quarters and thus give a direction to their gaze, as in the sequence of the film. I allow myself these constructive remarks, because I am constantly confronted with them, being myself a fan of genre scenes.