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Into The Sun's Shadow - Pt. 6

Writers Story/Sequential posted on Dec 09, 2023
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My deepest appreciation for coming by. I welcome any comment, critique, suggestion or advise that you might wish to leave. Composed and rendered in DAZ Studio, post work in GIMP Take care. Hilda P.S. Probably best if viewed in full size to be easier to read the narrative.

Comments (9)


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NoRhymeOrReasonToIt

5:31PM | Sat, 09 December 2023

Another great installment, the relationship between Brodie and Kara is heartwarming.

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Hilda_Starseer

5:40PM | Sat, 09 December 2023

Thank you, I really appreciate your comments.

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eekdog

6:13PM | Sat, 09 December 2023

youe doing a bang up job on this series. cool panels of enjoyment.

Hilda_Starseer

12:12PM | Sun, 10 December 2023

Thank you for your kind words.

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RedPhantom

8:22PM | Sat, 09 December 2023

Great job with this. Can't see wait to see where it will go.

Hilda_Starseer

12:14PM | Sun, 10 December 2023

Really appreciate your input, will do my best not to disappoint.

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ZjaelingNytesong

1:03PM | Sun, 10 December 2023

Really a wonderful chapter!

Hilda_Starseer

9:36AM | Tue, 12 December 2023

Thank you!

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Wolfenshire Online Now!

9:27PM | Sun, 10 December 2023

Wonderfully done illustrations to go with an intriguing story. You also said you welcomed critique, so, I have one, and it's only my opinion, and can't be certain without seeing it both ways, but the centered text for me seemed to be throwing off the pacing of the story. If they were captions, centered would definitely make the most sense, but you're writing a story, so left justified might keep the pacing on track better because that's the way our eyes were trained to read.

Hilda_Starseer

9:38AM | Tue, 12 December 2023

Thank you for the input, I'll try that on my next installment and see how it works out.

OmniFX

10:39AM | Mon, 11 December 2023

Really amazing images and excellent story. Opening in full image is the only way to view your intriguing story. Excellent work!

Hilda_Starseer

9:41AM | Tue, 12 December 2023

Appreciate the comment.

I noticed on my first posting about how in default view, it was very hard to read the narrative... so I put a 'P.S.' in the description area recommending full size view.

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Richardphotos

12:00AM | Wed, 13 December 2023

I agree with OmniFX. stellar art work

Hilda_Starseer

6:03PM | Wed, 13 December 2023

I sincerely appreciate your gracious comment.

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RodS

3:37PM | Fri, 15 December 2023

This is wonderfully done, Hilda! The art is outstanding, and I love the dialogue. The age of honor and respect - not like today, mostly.

Superb work!

Hilda_Starseer

4:19PM | Sun, 17 December 2023

In Lost Ark, the continent of Anikka (where Kara is from) is based in Asian (Oriental to be nonPC) culture and is a haven for the martial arts. Even today, there is still high respect for elder people in these places, though it does seem to be waning (thanks mainly to western influences), which is unfortunate.

And honor is attained through one's words and actions, and how true one is to both... not as it seems nowadays, by the number in your bank account.

I was raised to respect all people, especially the elders and intend to continue to do so... even if it's not a "trending" notion. If it bothers some people, they are more than welcome not to read my story and move on.


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