Star Trek Too, "The Tunnel" by WolaverJS
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Description
This is the second installment of my Star Trek story set in the time and at the technology level of Captain Kirk and the original U.S.S. Enterprise NCC-1701.
The original series Star Trek stories always had two stories per episode; by the end of this installment you should be able to figure out what the two stories are about and possibly how the title encapsulates them both. I'm trying very sincerely to rise to the original Star Trek standard.
Please register and give feedback on this first posting. There are 9 panels in this installment and 7 in the first - please view them all. I sincerely want your feedback on any aspect you care to comment about - costumes, characters, story, hook-value, scripting, anything.
Comments (3)
RodS
You have definitely succeeded with the look and feel of the original Star Trek universe, Jim. The bridge dialogue is perfect, and of course the bridge and different camera angles add to that atmosphere. Well done, Sir!
I like how you've used the multi-upload feature to display the frames here - I may have to look into that...
Good chatting with you last night - always a pleasure! Hope those storms leave you un-molested!
WolaverJS
Thank you, Sir. I appreciate the specifics you included in your feedback. I hope lots others see this and offer input! The more I get, the more I learn.
Diemamker
Excellent work you did here... only I won't comment much about it, seeing I'm in no position to tell you anything. I'll be waiting to see more.
WolaverJS
Thank you!
eekdog
really reminds me of the trek show called "the cage with this green gal. Kirk messed around with many.
WolaverJS
Thank you, seems I must have done ok with her. Did you focus on the green gal because your avatar is a green gal?
I was inspired by Star Trek Continues in an episode called "Lolani."