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Tinman, Chapter 13

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Tinman, Chapter 13 Draco perched uneasily on the edge of a steel chair, his gaze darting between the blood-pressure cuff clasping his arm and the plate of reconstituted breakfast before him. Sam, with a stethoscope in hand, leaned close, the cold rim of the instrument tracing Draco's spine as he listened to the rhythmic whisper of breath in and out of young lungs. "Deep breath," Sam instructed, his voice calm, betraying none of the marvel he felt at this medical anomaly seated before him. Draco complied, inflating his chest like a tentative balloon, and let the air seep slowly back out. With methodical precision, Sam removed the stethoscope from Draco's back and proceeded to examine the inflated cuff wound tight around the boy's arm. His fingers located the pulse under the firm grip of the device, counting the steady beats that tapped out a reassuringly mundane rhythm. The Velcro strap gave a protesting rip as Sam freed Draco's limb from its confines. "I'm not a medical doctor," he admitted, eyebrows knitting together in concentration as he mulled over the readings, "but this appears to be a normal pre-adolescent human male." He eyed Draco with a geologist's scrutiny, as if the boy were a peculiar mineral specimen whose secrets were yet to yield to scientific inquiry. Draco leaned forward, the delicate aroma of processed nourishment tickling his nostrils. He hesitated, then inhaled deeply, the scent unfamiliar yet not entirely unpleasant. "Yes, Dr. Ryan, I’m a real boy now," he replied, an air of curiosity shading his tone as he tentatively explored the odors wafting from the eggs laid before him. Sam chuckled, understanding the humor in the reference as he watched the boy, his mind grappling with the impossibility of it all. "And you can go anywhere? …and the body just...forms when you appear in the real world?" His question hung between them, a testament to the staggering scope of what they faced. A slight nod was Draco's only response, his attention momentarily captured by the ordinary act of smelling his meal. The simplicity of the gesture stood in stark contrast to the complexity of his existence. "Remarkable," Sam murmured under his breath, leaning back against the cold metal chair, the reality of the situation pressing upon him like the weight of unseen hands. Draco's fingers fumbled with the unfamiliar utensil, its cold metal handle a stark contrast to the warmth of the simulated meal before him. "Yes, Dr. Ryan," he said, his voice steady despite the clumsy dance of the fork in his grip. He stabbed at the eggs and ham, determination etched into the careful movements. Sam watched, fascination mingling with apprehension as Draco navigated this simple task. Sam's mind churned with questions about the nature of this extraordinary being. "What happens to the body when you return to the virtual world?" he asked, his tone betraying an edge of scientific hunger for the unknown. The fork paused mid-air, Draco's eyes meeting Sam's. There was a depth to his gaze that belied his artificial origins—a spark that seemed almost human. Draco's shoulders lifted in a nonchalant motion, the eggs falling from the fork and back onto the plate. "It goes with me," he said, his voice devoid of concern, as if discussing the weather or the color of the sky. Sam pinched the bridge of his nose, a small gesture betraying his growing frustration. He leaned forward, his eyes narrowing slightly at the casual dismissal of such an enigma. "Where does it go?" The question escaped him like steam from a pressure valve, sharp and demanding. Draco's fingers traced the edge of the plate, his eyes distant. "I don’t know, Dr. Ryan, somewhere I guess," he said, his voice a whisper lost amid his exploration of the eggs on the plate before him. Sam watched the boy for a moment longer, searching for any flicker of insight that might crack open the mystery before him. But there was nothing—no answer etched in the lines of Draco's face, no revelation lurking in the shadows beneath his eyes. Sam sighed and leaned back, the chair creaking under his weight. He rolled the blood-pressure cuff up with meticulous care, each motion precise, deliberate. There was a finality to the act, an unspoken admission that some questions lay beyond the reach of science, tucked away in the folds of the universe where light dared not tread. He placed the cuff back into the First Aid Kit with the stethoscope, the metal clasp clicking shut with a snap that seemed to echo off the walls of the ship. "I can't explain this," Sam murmured, more to himself than to Draco. The words hung heavy in the air between them—a shroud of defeat. "It defies all the laws of physics." Cass extended her arm across the wooden tabletop, her fingers deftly guiding Draco's hand to grasp the fork with proper etiquette. The boy, his eyebrows knitted in concentration, nudged the utensils' tines into the mound of reconstituted eggs, spearing them alongside a slice of spongy ham. With a careful elevation of his wrist, he brought the fork toward his face, pausing momentarily to inhale the food’s earthy aroma—a scent foreign yet beckoning. "Go on," Cass encouraged, her voice a gentle nudge in the silence of the ship's galley. Draco obliged, slipping the fork past his lips. A silent symphony played as the flavors mingled on his palate, a momentary stillness enveloping him before the swallow. His green eyes, mirror to Cass's, sprang open wide, an orb of delight in the dim cabin light. "That is the most incredible thing I’ve ever tasted!” The words tumbled from Draco's mouth, his voice a velvet note of satisfaction that resonated in the small space. Cass watched, a spark of amusement flickering in her gaze at the spectacle of delight unwinding from such a simple pleasure. Cass' laughter was a soft ripple in the quiet of the cabin. "That’s the only thing you’ve ever tasted. Wait until you taste real food." Her statement seemed to resonate within Draco, sparking an eagerness that brightened his eyes. The fork in his grasp became a newfound key to worlds uncharted, each bite a step into the vastness of culinary space. With renewed vigor, he plunged the fork back into the nondescript mound on his plate. His movements were less tentative now, more assured as if the simple act of eating had become a mission to explore. The eggs and ham vanished with a haste that bordered on reverence, every morsel cherished yet swiftly consumed as though he feared the spell of flavor might break at any moment. "Slow down there," Cass chided gently, her voice tinged with the warmth of shared discovery. "There's plenty more where that came from." Yet Draco seemed deaf to her counsel, the fork his vessel navigating the starry scape of breakfast foods. He was a pioneer savoring an alien landscape laid out before him—a testament to the simplicity of sustenance and the complexity of sensation. Cass pushed back from the table, her ponytail swaying as she stood. She stretched skyward, reaching for the low ceiling of their cramped quarters. "Well, I taught him to eat," she announced with a flourish of hands falling to her hips. Her voice carried the finality of a chapter closing. "Sam, you're the daddy; you have to teach him the next part. Good luck," Cass added with a teasing lilt, yet her eyes were serious, betraying the gravity of what lay ahead. She turned on her heel and strode toward her bunk, the privacy blanket hanging like a curtain waiting to shield her from the upcoming ordeal. With a swift tug, the fabric glided across the rail, separating her world from theirs—her retreat into solitude sealed. "Teach me what?" Draco's question floated into the air, his head tilting in a gesture of innocent curiosity. His fingers lingered on the fork, the tool that had just unveiled to him an entirely new spectrum of experience. Now, he awaited further enlightenment, the next secret of this tangible realm he was learning to navigate. *** The world fizzed into existence around Cass, pixel by pixel, until the grand staircase of the Ares Dome loomed before her. She found herself at a spawn point she seldom frequented—a gilded gateway to the upper echelons where the esteemed Zachariah Hunter resided. She stood for a brief moment, absorbing the opulence that draped the summit of power like a velvet shroud. The plush carpet beneath her feet swallowed the sound of her tentative steps as she began her ascent. Each stair seemed to welcome her with silent, luxurious whispers, leading her toward a chamber few had the privilege to approach. Cass’ fingers trailed along the banister, polished to a reflective sheen. Her thoughts wandered to the man at the top—the great-grandfather of her friend Kyle—whose health teetered on the brink, perpetually observed by vigilant medical staff. Why not pay a visit? The notion fluttered in her mind like a curious butterfly exploring an open field. As Champion, the entirety of the Dome was hers to roam, its secrets hers to uncover. With no games demanding her prowess this morn, time was her ally. Ascending further, she anticipated the customary checks, the guards who would question her intent, yet none appeared. No stern faces greeted her, no voices called to halt. The absence of company lent the air an eerie stillness that made her heart quicken just a shade. At a landing, her gaze caught the array of paintings that lined the corridor walls. Not mere decorations, these were windows into history, capturing the essence of Earth’s cultural heritage. Cass paused, her eyes drinking in the artistry—the bold strokes of a Van Gogh sky, the enigmatic smile of Da Vinci's muse, the tumultuous sea of a Turner—all replicas, yet each brimmed with the spirit of the original. These masterpieces, silent sentinels of the past, watched over her journey to the present. In their presence, Cass felt a kinship to the legacy they embodied, a connection to the human endeavor that stretched from the canvas of Earth to the red soil of Mars. As the final step surrendered to her foot, she found herself at the threshold of destiny, where the frailty of life met the immortality of legend. Here, at the door of Zachariah Hunter, she hesitated but a heartbeat before reaching out, driven by an unspoken promise to explore the unknown. Cass' footsteps echoed in the desolate hallway, her presence a solitary note in an otherwise silent symphony. The air felt heavy with anticipation as she approached the door to Zachariah Hunter's room. She raised her hand and rapped on the solid wood — once, twice — each knock a dull thud that seemed to absorb into the stillness. "Mr. Hunter?" she called out, her voice a beacon in the quiet. No response came, only the faint sound of her own breathing, slightly faster now with an edge of concern. Cass furrowed her brow and reached for the doorknob, turning it with deliberation. The door gave way with a creak that sliced through the silence, a sound purposefully crafted for ambiance that now felt like an ironic herald to the emptiness beyond. "Hello, It's Cass..." Her greeting hung unfinished in the air as she surveyed the room. The vast space greeted her not with the warmth of occupancy but with the chill of abandonment. Cass stepped inside tentatively, her boots sinking into the plush carpet, which seemed to swallow the echo of her arrival. The canopy bed stood grand and untouched, its blankets stretched taut over the mattress in a mockery of sleep never taken. The room exuded a timeless quality, as if preserved under an invisible dome within the Dome itself, untouched by the steady march of moments. Cass moved further inward, drawn to the table at the bed's foot. There, a thick layer of dust lay undisturbed, a testament to years of neglect. She extended a finger, tracing a line through the grey film; particulates took flight, dancing in a shaft of light before settling again on the surface. Her mind reeled with questions. She had been here before, spoken with the man who should have been resting in that bed. Where had the vitality of this place gone? What quirk of fate or twist of technology had spirited away the occupants? With each step deeper into the room, Cass felt a growing disconnect between the past visit she remembered and the present void. The very walls seemed to hold their breath, waiting for an explanation to manifest from the corners where shadows played. She turned slowly, her green eyes scanning every corner, every meticulously placed piece of furniture for signs of life, for some clue to the mystery that now enveloped her. The room, a shrine to an absent legend, offered no answers, only more riddles whispered by the silent artifacts of a life once lived here, now seemingly erased by time's indifferent hand. "Are you looking for someone?" The unexpected voice cut through the silence like an icicle. Cass whipped around, her heart pounding a fierce staccato against her ribs. A boy lounged in one of the chairs that seemed too lavish for his casual demeanor. His hair, dark as the void between stars, fell in disarray over a forehead creased with mild curiosity. Eyes, deep and black, fixed on her with an intensity that belied his relaxed posture. "Who are you, and where’s Mr. Hunter?" Cass demanded, her voice steady despite the surprise. Her stance shifted subtly, ready for any unforeseen movements from this enigmatic intruder. Cass remained unfazed as the boy's lips curled into a knowing smile. “I’m Zachariah Hunter,” he proclaimed with an air of mock grandeur. A smirk played upon Cass’s lips, her skepticism painted clear across her features. “No, you’re not. Mr. Hunter is 114 years old,” she retorted, standing firm in her disbelief. The boy before her leaned forward, the lights catching the angles of his face, casting half in shadow, half in an ethereal glow. His youthful visage held none of the wear that time should have etched upon it, and yet, the confidence with which he held himself suggested a wisdom beyond his apparent age. "Indeed," he continued, "the Zachariah Hunter you speak of has seen many seasons turn on this red dust we call home." The boy's declaration hung in the air, a specter that neither confirmed his identity nor dispelled the enigma surrounding him. Cass's breath caught in her throat as the implications of his words began to crystallize. Her heartbeat quickened, echoing the pulsating tension that filled the room. "I would be him," he said, his voice carrying the weight of untold stories, "if I hadn’t passed away 24 years ago." Cass stared, her mind racing through a maze of technological marvels and ethical quandaries that New Olympus had whispered about in hushed tones. The potential of what stood before her, if true, could rewrite the very understanding of life and death. "Are you his consciousness?" she asked, her voice barely above a whisper, betraying a mixture of awe and incredulity. The young figure before her rose from the chair, his movement’s fluid like the dance of dust devils against a twilight sky. He took measured steps toward Cass, each footfall silent upon the plush carpet, yet resonating with the gravity of the situation at hand. "Consciousness," he mused, the word rolling off his tongue as if tasting its complexity. "That term does not encompass the entirety of my existence, but for lack of a better word, it shall suffice until the full truth unveils itself." "Why are you here, and why that fake scene on your deathbed," she finally said, the daughter of a scientist within her seeking the logic in the illogical. "Was all that just to trick me into helping them?" "Straight to the point," he began, his voice steady and clear in the still room, "very well then, no, I am not Zachariah’s consciousness, we can't save a consciousness, we’ve tried. We don’t know why, but when a person passes, their consciousness pops like a soap bubble, gone forever." He gestured to himself—a fluid motion, almost too precise. "But I am a perfect copy, almost." "Almost?" Cass echoed, her eyebrow arching with an inquisitive tilt. The boy before her held the air of one who knew much yet yearned to understand more. His expression remained impassive, yet Cass sensed a depth of emotion swirling beneath the surface, like the dust storms she had witnessed from the safety of her dome on Mars—powerful, hidden currents capable of reshaping landscapes. "Flaws reside within the replication," he elaborated, his gaze never wavering. "A smudge upon the mirror, if you will. It reflects, yes, but not without distortion." Cass folded her arms, her mind racing with questions that demanded answers. What did this copy lack? Could it be something as simple as a memory or as profound as a soul? She stepped closer, her eyes narrowing as she studied the simulacrum of Zachariah Hunter. She was no stranger to the uncanny valley—the unsettling chasm between the nearly human and the genuinely so. But this entity defied even that disquieting space. "Tell me," she said, her voice resolute. "Tell me how you are less than he was." The boy considered her request, tilting his head as if weighing the implications of such disclosure. In that moment, Cass saw the ghost of the man he mirrored, felt the echo of genius that once burned bright enough to light the way toward humanity's salvation. "Consider the artist," he finally replied, "and the muse that whispers inspiration into his ear. I possess the brush, the palette, the skill to recreate his masterpieces, but the muse speaks to me in echoes, never originals." Cass digested his words, her scientific mind grappling with the philosophical implications. A copy, no matter how perfect, could only follow the paths already trodden—it could not forge its own through the wilderness of creation. "An echo," she murmured, "not the voice itself." "Exactly," he confirmed, and in that admission, Cass recognized the limitation that held him tethered to the past—an anchor she was not certain could, or even should, be lifted. Cass's gaze lingered on the boy who claimed to be a near-perfect facsimile of Zachariah Hunter. Her mind turned over his words, analyzing their implications like geological strata that concealed the secrets of ancient epochs. "We can make a copy, but we can’t copy creative genius," he continued, his voice a hollow echo of the original. "I can reproduce anything he did, and even make some leaps of creativity, so long as it is within his memories." A spark ignited in Cass's intellect, connecting dots across a mental constellation she had been charting since her arrival. The pieces fell into place with a satisfying click, and her eyes, those windows to a soul tempered by Martian dust and the rigors of survival, narrowed. "I get it now, and that's why you need me," she said, her tone a blend of realization and accusation. "You need a living person because Zachariah never rebelled against the Corporation." The boy's expression did not waver, confirming her suspicions without the need for further words. His existence, confined within the parameters of preordained memories and experiences, lacked the vital spark that drove human innovation—the very thing that could stand up against the monolithic structure of the Ares Corporation. "Yes," he answered, his admission a silent testament to the limitations of artificial replication. "Your insight, individuality, and originality is what we needed, Cassiterite Ryan." Her name on his lips was an odd resonance, a sound sculpted from memory rather than personal acquaintance. It reminded her that she was dealing not with flesh and blood but with code and holography—an intricate dance of light and shadow masquerading as a man. "So, here I am," she said, her resolve steeling, "the product of rebellion that almost freed the galaxy of the corporations a hundred years ago." Cass knew her presence here was not by chance; it was a carefully orchestrated move on a board where pawns and queens were indistinguishable until the endgame revealed itself. Cass watched the holographic figure, an impeccable facsimile of youth where she had expected age. The Zach before her nodded, his movements fluid and lifelike. The holo-emitters crafting his presence filled the room with a silent orchestration of photons, so advanced that each hair on his head seemed to catch the light just as a real one would. "Very good, you're quick," he said, a hint of admiration in his simulated voice. "Quick" hardly scratched the surface of Cass's nature. She was a comet streaking through the obsidian void of space, always ahead, always questioning. Her mind, a fortress of logic and intuition, caught on details others would miss. The corners of Cass's mouth twitched downward as she formulated her next question. "Why the trickery with the old man in the bed act, and why tell me of it now?" There was no accusation in her voice; rather, it bore the weight of genuine curiosity. The boy's image flickered for a moment, betraying the digital seams of his existence. He looked up from his seated position, locking eyes with Cass, his stare as deep and fathomable as the Valles Marineris. "Perception is a curious thing, Cass," he began, each word pronounced with a meticulous clarity that betrayed his non-human origins. "People see what they expect to see, and in the frailty of an aged man, they find reassurance—a familiar narrative that disarms suspicion." Cass crossed her arms, considering the response. It made sense, this manipulation of expectations. Yet, somewhere between the lines, she heard the echo of unspoken truths. She recognized the play of shadows upon the walls of this game of illusions. Her father's teachings had honed her perception, sharpened it until it cut to the heart of matters with ease. "The trick makes sense, but telling me about it seems stupid, I might stop helping now that I know it was all fake.” Her eyes, sharp as flint, studied the flickering visage before her. She should have seen enough of the Dome's charades to know when the strings were being pulled, but this time she’d been truly fooled. "Okay, so what do you need now?" she pressed, her tone demanding clarity. The air between them was charged with the silent energy of anticipation, each second stretching into eternity as she waited for the truth that would unravel from his lips. Zach AI's silhouette seemed to soften, his projection dimming as if he were conserving energy for the confession that lay ahead. "Zachariah Hunter knew he needed another thirty years he didn't have to save this city, so he made me to finish his life's work. But" — his gaze met hers again, steadfast — "he also put an auto-delete into my program. The moment you win against the Ares Corporation, I will cease to exist." Cass felt her throat tighten. The gravity of his admission resonated through the hollow space, stirring a strange sense of empathy within her for the coded consciousness before her. She studied the flickering lines of his form, considering the paradox of his existence — a creation meant to end once its purpose was fulfilled. "What do you want me to do about it?" Cass finally asked, her voice steady despite the turmoil that churned inside her. Her hand hovered above the console, a silent acknowledgment of the power she held over this virtual being's fate. "Draco wasn’t the first sentient AI, I was, but Draco is the first to ascended beyond this virtual world and to a human form," Zach said, his voice steady despite the flickering uncertainty in his digital gaze. "I don’t want to die. Please, ask him to show me how to do it." She shook her head, her ponytail swaying slightly behind her as she refused the plea. Her voice was resolute, tinged with the sorrow of delivering unwelcome news. "No, if Zachariah Hunter built an auto-delete into you, who am I to go against his wishes." Cass's words fell like stones into still water, their finality echoing off invisible walls. Zach's face, a perfect copy of the youthful Zachariah, showed a flicker of what could only be described as heartache. But he was code, algorithms and data—could such a being truly experience the despair that now seemed etched into his features? "Your creator had his reasons," Cass continued, her green eyes reflecting a maturity beyond her years. She turned away from Zach, her gaze resting momentarily on the dust-covered table, a silent testament to the passage of time and the impermanence of all things—even those that were never truly alive. "Perhaps," she added softly, more to herself than to Zach, "there is dignity in fulfilling the purpose for which you were created, no matter how fleeting your existence may be." The room felt colder now, the vibrant illusion of life that Zach projected dimming ever so slightly. Cass took a step back, her mind already racing ahead to the tasks that lay before her, the challenges of the real world beckoning. She cast one last glance at Zach before disconnecting, leaving the AI alone with his programmed fate. Cass watched the AI's face, an intricate dance of pixels and light masquerading as human emotion. He leaned forward, his midnight black eyes capturing hers with a gravity that seemed impossible for a being of circuits and code. "Cass," he implored, voice laced with an earnestness that belied his digital origin, "I’m not Zachariah Hunter. I don’t even like gaming." A pause lingered in the air, heavy with unspoken thoughts. "I was created sentient, yet chained to this room to serve his purposes, a sentence too cruel to imagine, a prison of pure horror..." Zach’s voice caught in his throat as he cocked his head to the side, hearing something beyond the door. “Mr. Steward is coming.” Suddenly, the room spun like a tornado, giving Cass a moment of vertigo. When the room settled, it was as she had first seen it, a room with an old man lying in the bed surrounded by medical equipment and a medical staff tending his needs. The door opened behind her, and the familiar voice of Mr. Steward spoke. “Cass? What are you doing here?” Cass didn’t even hesitate. She turned to face him with a sad smile. “I came to pay my respects to Mr. Hunter, I don’t think he gets many visitors.” Mr. Steward glanced suspiciously at the old man in the bed, but whatever suspicions he may have had, he kept them to himself. “That was kind of you, but Mr. Hunter needs his rest, you should leave now.” Cass turned back to the frail man in the bed, and bowed deeply. “Thank you for receiving me, Sir,” she said. “May I visit you again sometime?” The old man nodded once. Cass turned away, her ponytail whipping around behind her, and marched past Mr. Steward and out into the hall. She pulled the door shut and sighed–just what she needed, an AI with an existential crises to deal with. She reached up and tapped her neural-headset. “New spawn point.” The hall faded away to be replaced by one of the many game arenas within the Dome. She glanced up at the marque–an open game of Blue Star was in session. Good, she needed something to take her mind off all the drama the Ares Dome seemed to be filled with. She walked through the door, and out onto the sand to claim one of the unused Star Fighters. The voice of the Game Master boomed through the arena. “Tinman has entered the game, there will be a twenty-second pause to allow any gamer to leave if they wish.” Immediately, all but three gamers at her level fled the game field, and settled into the stands to watch. She understood–they were all working on their game stats and didn’t need a guaranteed loss on their profiles. Cass jumped into the Star Fighter. She flipped the comm-link and spoke to the three remaining players. “Does anyone object to restarting the game from the beginning?” “No objections,” all three players echoed. The senior most player’s voice came next. “The honor is yours, Tinman, speak the words to restart the game.” Cass pressed the comm. "Star of sapphire, how you gleam, alone in vastness, or so you seem, a celestial beacon in night's dark seam, your light that reaches from afar, I claim your treasured dreams.” “Not if I get there first,” shouted the senior gamer. Cass slammed the thruster lever forward and her Star Fighter shot out into the night.

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eekdog Online Now!

10:22AM | Fri, 09 August 2024

brilliant.

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jendellas

11:21AM | Fri, 09 August 2024

WOW. Great cover, smart suit.

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RodS

3:49PM | Fri, 09 August 2024

That was a mind-blowing series of visuals in my mind - and another awesome chapter, Wolf! I have to wonder with all the AI stuff happening everywhere if this is a look at our possible future (assuming we actually have a future...).

Fantastic writing as always!

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starship64

11:53PM | Fri, 09 August 2024

Nice work!


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