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Adrift - A Short Story

Writers Science Fiction posted on Oct 10, 2024
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Adrift, a Short Story Dr. Rebeca Pierce pressed her forehead against the cool transparency of the observation window, her gaze locked on the colossal form of the colony dome ship. It hung in the void like a promise of mankind's unyielding ambition—a promise that today faced its ultimate test. The new hyperspace engines, glinting in the distant sunlight, were poised to fling this monument of human ingenuity into hyperspace. "Ready for history, Dr. Pierce?" Her colleague, Dr. Marcus Leung, joined her at the window, his voice a casual lilt that grated against the gravity of the moment. Rebeca's eyes didn't waver from the ship. "History is written by success, Marcus," she murmured, her thoughts racing through the calculations that had consumed her last waking hours. "I'm telling you, the equation isn't right. We can't hyperspace jump that much mass, at least not yet, not with this equation." Leung gave a half-shrug, his gaze briefly meeting the silhouette of the dome ship before returning to his data pad. "It worked on the Lance Ships, it will work on the colony ship." "Apples and supernovas, Marcus. The Lance ships are a fraction of the mass." Rebeca turned to face him, the reflection of the vessel framing her like a halo of stars. "Putting that ship in hyperspace will be like trying to float a battleship in a bathtub." Leung's brow furrowed but he masked any hint of concern with an unwavering confidence. "You worry too much, Rebeca. Today we make history or we learn. Either way, we push forward." Rebeca let out a breath she hadn't realized she'd been holding, her eyes drifting back to the behemoth structure outside. The weight of potential disaster felt heavy on her shoulders, a burden she carried as the lead scientist. She knew the risks better than anyone, and yet the allure of progress, the siren song of the unknown, thrummed in her veins. Was it worth it? The answer would come soon enough, cloaked in the silence of the cosmos and the hum of the engines that dared to defy it. In the hours that followed, Rebeca watched the shuttles arrive at the Dome Ship with the twenty-five engineers, scientists, and technicians that would crew the colossal ship. She could see people scurrying about, finalizing preparations on the hyperspace engines that dwarfed even the grandeur of the dome ship itself. News ships jostled for position nearby, their cameras trained on the event destined for the annals of human history. "Flight control, this is Dome Ship Actual. We are T-minus ten minutes to jump," crackled the comm system, the voice steady but charged with latent excitement. "Copy that, Dome Ship Actual. All eyes are on you. Godspeed," came the reply from Flight Control. Rebeca positioned herself at the observation window once more, her reflection barely visible against the backdrop of stars. The countdown began, each number punctuated by the beat of her heart. Engineers and pilots alike held their breath, some murmuring silent prayers or gripping lucky charms. "Three... two... one... mark." A shimmering haze enveloped the dome ship, a hyperspace bubble swelling like a soap bubble reflecting the cosmos. Then, with a silence more profound than any sound, the ship vanished, leaving behind a void where it had once stood massive and resolute. "Jump successful," someone whispered in awe, though Rebeca knew the true test would come in one hour when they attempted to re-enter normal space. Would the ship emerge in Lunar Orbit as planned, or would her dire predictions come to pass? For now, all she could do was wait, the image of the disappearing dome ship seared into her memory, a gamble between humanity's ambition and the unforgiving laws of physics. The research vessel glided through the silence of space, propelled by a soft thrum of engines as it inched closer to Lunar Orbit. From this vantage point, Rebeca's eyes remained fixed on the void where the Dome Ship was scheduled to re-emerge. The weightless environment did nothing to alleviate the gravity of her concern; her fingers traced the cold glass of the observation window, leaving ephemeral marks that fogged and faded. "Viewers from Earth, what you're witnessing could be the dawn of interstellar colonization," boomed a broadcaster's voice from the news ships, their signals beaming across the vast distance to reach the blue planet below. "Hyperspace technology bends the fabric of space-time itself, allowing faster-than-light travel..." Rebeca barely registered the explanations echoing around her. She knew the science, the theories, and the equations better than anyone. It was the unknown variables of reality that gnawed at her now. "Supplies onboard include hydroponic farms, seed banks, and water recycling systems," continued the optimistic narration, painting a hopeful future among the stars. The visionary words clashed against the stark silence that followed the countdown. "Flight control, we are at T-plus one hour," came the crisp voice of the co-pilot. The moment had arrived. Eyes turned upward, hands paused mid-task, and every breath held in collective anticipation. "Any visual on the Dome Ship?" Rebeca asked, her voice cutting through the tense quiet. "Negative, no sign yet," the reply was almost a whisper. Minutes unfurled into hours with the clock's ticking growing louder in Rebeca's ears, each second a drumbeat of dread. The Dome Ship, with its precious cargo of human lives and dreams, remained absent from the black canvas of space where it should have painted its presence. Days morphed into a blur as hypotheses were posited and discarded, simulations run and rerun. Hundreds of scientists, including Rebeca, poured over data streams, searching for the flaw, the overlooked detail that could explain the anomaly. "Could it be a misalignment in the hyperspace coordinates?" one engineer proposed, desperation seeping into his analytical tone. "Or a temporal miscalculation? Could the ship be caught in a time dilation effect?" another suggested, her eyes bloodshot from sleepless nights hunched over computer screens. Rebeca's gaze returned to the window, the stars beyond indifferent to their plight. Her mind raced through calculations and consequences, but her heart feared the grim possibility that her warnings had been more than just cautionary. "Keep working," she urged her team, her voice steady despite the turmoil within. "We have to find out what went wrong." And so they toiled, adrift in uncertainty, while the clock continued its relentless march forward, each tick an echo in the vacuum between hope and despair. The atmosphere was heavy inside the research vessel's control room, a stark contrast to the weightlessness of space. Rebeca stood before the panoramic window, her reflection superimposed over the vast emptiness where the Dome Ship should have been. The stars seemed to mock her with their steady glow, indifferent to the calamity unfolding millions of miles away. "Dr. Rebeca Pierce," came the static-riddled voice through the intercom. "Please report to the communication deck. Orders from Earth Space Command." A collective sigh rippled through the remaining crew. They knew what was coming. Eight weeks had passed without a trace of the Dome Ship or the brave souls who ventured aboard it. The media circus that had once clamored for the best angles and exclusive interviews had dwindled to a ghostly presence, their ships now just pinpoints of light retreating into the distance. Rebeca made her way to the communication deck, each step feeling heavier than the last. She entered the dimly lit room to find the captain waiting for her, his face etched with lines of defeat. "Orders from the top," he said, handing her a tablet. "We're to pack up and head back. They've declared the Dome Ship lost." "Lost," Rebeca echoed, the word tasting like ash in her mouth. Her theory, her warnings—had they been heeded, perhaps this could have been avoided. In the ensuing days, Earth had become a maelstrom of political turmoil. News feeds were alight with debates and accusations as politicians sought to distance themselves from the disaster. Space Command's budget was on the chopping block, careers and reputations hanging in the balance. Rebeca found herself summoned before a Congressional inquiry, a panel of stern-faced officials seeking a scapegoat for public outrage. The chamber was cold, the air thick with suspicion and barely concealed hostility. "Dr. Pierce," one of the officials began, his voice resonating through the chamber, "you were part of the team responsible for the calculations that led to the deployment of the hyperspace engines. What went wrong?" Rebeca steadied herself, preparing to recount the familiar arguments. "I warned of the potential risks—" she started, but the doors to the chamber suddenly burst open. An intern, out of breath and wide-eyed, stumbled into the room. "It's back," he panted, gripping the doorframe for support. "The Dome Ship... it just appeared in Lunar Orbit!" Silence fell, a stunned hush that gripped every heart in the room. Rebeca's pulse quickened, a mixture of relief and dread flooding through her. The impossible had happened—the ship had returned. But in what state? And at what cost? "Adjourned," the official said abruptly, the inquiry forgotten as all eyes turned to the monitors, hungry for a glimpse of the prodigal vessel that defied time and space to reappear among them. Rebeca Pierce's heart hammered against her ribs as the shuttle detached from the research vessel with a gentle shudder. The view from the cockpit revealed the Dome Ship, a monolith against the stark backdrop of space, hauntingly different from the sleek vessel she remembered. "Take us in," she ordered, her voice betraying none of the tumultuous emotions churning inside her. "Sir, we should proceed with caution," the pilot cautioned, his hands steady on the controls despite the uncertainty that permeated the cabin. "Agreed. One pass around the ship before we land," Rebeca conceded, her gaze locked onto the behemoth that had once been humanity's beacon of hope for the future. As they circled the Dome Ship, the enormity of the changes it had undergone during its mysterious absence became clear. Makeshift structures clung to its surface like barnacles, fashioned from materials that were unmistakably parts of the original colony design. The metal hull bore the scars of time, pitted and discolored, whispering tales of eons spent in the void. Once docked, Rebeca led her team through the airlock, stepping into the ghost of the ship that had launched with such promise. The corridors felt narrower, the rooms repurposed and alien. Dust danced in the beams of their flashlights, settling on surfaces that seemed to sigh with ancient weariness. "Someone lived here," observed a Junior Scientist, sweeping a hand over a rough-hewn table that stood where modular labs used to be. "Many someones, over many years," Rebeca murmured, more to herself than to her team. Her boots echoed hollowly as they traversed what had become a patchwork of living quarters and communal spaces. They entered a vast chamber, the dome overhead letting in the cold light of distant stars. Where once there had been the beginnings of a high-tech urban environment, now rows upon rows of terraces stretched out, barren and desolate. The remnants of irrigation systems lay dormant, the promise of harvests long since faded. "They disassembled all the surface buildings to make room for farming," the Junior Scientist noted, wonder lacing his words at the evidence of adaptation and survival. Rebeca crouched, her fingers sifting through the dry, lifeless soil that filled the terraces. No moisture clung to her skin, no scent of greenery lingered in the air—just the sterile touch of sterility and loss. "This soil is spent, nothing can grow here anymore," she said, her voice a soft echo in the vast emptiness. The weight of countless cycles of planting and reaping, flourishing and withering settled on her shoulders—a testament to a relentless pursuit of life in the face of isolation. The team moved in silence, the reality of the derelict ship enveloping them. Each step took them deeper into the narrative of a lost human saga, each discovery a piece of the puzzle they were only beginning to comprehend. Rebeca knew that beyond the science, beyond the calculations that had gone awry, there lay stories of determination, of generations clinging to existence against the immutable expanse of hyperspace. And now, it was their duty to piece together that history, to honor those who had endured and ultimately faded within the confines of this once-gleaming vessel turned time-worn ark. Rebeca's gaze followed the engineer's outstretched hand, his finger tracing the spectral readout that danced with the ghostly blues and greens of a time-stretched past. The holographic display flickered with data points, each a silent witness to an epoch-spanning odyssey. "Ma’am," the engineer's voice broke through the stillness, his eyes not leaving the screen. "I just finished my initial analysis, the metal in this ship is over six-thousand years old. You can see the stress fractures–this ship is held together with duct tape and chewing gum." In the dim light of the control room, Rebeca's face remained impassive, but her mind raced, calculations and theories spiraling into the realm of the unthinkable. She turned, looking past the junior scientist, to the curving walls that had borne witness to uncounted days. "So, where has this ship been for six-thousand years?" she murmured, the words tasting of ashes and lost time. The junior scientist, eyes wide with the magnitude of their discovery, stepped closer, his voice barely above a whisper. "And where did all the people go?" Moving toward the nearest planter, Rebeca cupped a handful of soil, letting the fine grains slip through her fingers back to the ground. "That’s a good question, the soil is exhausted, they could only have remained here a few centuries," she replied, her tone a question for a mystery getting bigger by the moment. The dust settled, merging once more with its kin, a communion of life's remnants. "But, that would mean..." the junior scientist's voice trailed off, grappling with the enormity of the implication. "Yes," Rebeca said, her resolve hardening like the hull of the ship around them. "The test crew's descendants lived here until the ship could no longer sustain life.” Rebeca picked up a yellowed parchment from a table with an intricate and artistic rendering of the Pyramids of Giza. She glanced at the faces of her team, all of them bewildered by the state of the ship. “Dr. Leung,” Rebeca turned to her second in command. “I didn’t see the five shuttles in the docking bay when we landed.” “Neither did I, they might have salvaged them for parts,” Dr. Leung replied. “The lead engineer, Dr. Ramses,” continued Rebeca. “Wasn’t his family from Egypt?” Dr. Leung pursed his lips. “I think so. I know he attended the Cairo University of Engineering.” "Send for the archeologists and anthropologists." Rebeca's command cut through the hush, a call to action amidst the echoes of a bygone civilization. "There’s a bigger mystery here than we know." With that, the silence returned, as if the ship itself held its breath, waiting for its story to be told.

Comments (6)


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eekdog

10:11AM | Thu, 10 October 2024

great short story today.

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RodS

2:20PM | Thu, 10 October 2024

OK... Now this is Twilight Zone stuff. I can just imagine this as an episode of that show. I love it! And you've even left a nice opening for a future story-line. Brilliant!

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radioham

7:51PM | Thu, 10 October 2024

But will the mystery get to give the answer that is a question I hope that you follow this up Great story

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starship64

11:58PM | Thu, 10 October 2024

Nicely done.

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VDH

6:58AM | Fri, 11 October 2024

Great creation, impressive composition !!

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jendellas

5:07PM | Sat, 19 October 2024

Bit of a cliff hanger.


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