Guardian of Temple 24 by KF
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Description
Credits:
V4 @ Daz
Ghostship Eyes @ Share CG
Character and texture: Amanda by RPD (I don't remember where I downloaded)
Comments (4)
hborre
Interesting rendition. May I recommend posing her face better? She has a deadpan expression, eyes looking forward with no focus, and her face shows no emotion. I feel she has to have a purpose in the scene to draw the viewer to her. Otherwise, she is a disinterested figure dropped onto a set with no purpose. The lighting is adequate, but I believe it's off. It is a nighttime scene; the flames and moonlight should generate more intense lighting and shadows. Understandably, you would like to show details in every aspect of the stage, but, realistically, you are undervaluing your character as the focal point. Try depth of field to isolate the Guardian, and give her an interesting pose. She should appear menacing. Reduce your ambient lighting and concentrate on the flame lighting, it should be the brightest point of your scene.
I think there is room for further improvement.
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Thank you hborre
eekdog
a temple beauty.
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Thanks Steve
radioham
Two nice renders
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Thank you radioham
Saby55
A wonderful warrior, fantastic rendering 👍🙋♂️
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Thank you very much Saby55