Mystic by nonjuan

Photography • (none) • posted on Jan 28, 2003

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Hey - come on guys - the least you could do is comment. After all, I checked the box that says "Allow viewers to make comments." I'm beggin ya... It's free!!!!

Comments (10)

cynlee

11:33PM | Tue, 28 January 2003

ok, ok! you know i will! where have you been hiding all this talent!...you silly...the girl looks talented too & beautiful! i feel like i've stepped into the back door of the caberet! (i see a tiny glitch in the right wrist but besides that you did a fabulous job here!)

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zorares

11:59PM | Tue, 28 January 2003

Very nice! Drool!

Faegodesstheresa

12:47AM | Wed, 29 January 2003

Sexy,magical, sensual and tasteful.Nice job!!

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RajDArge

12:51AM | Wed, 29 January 2003

y'sure that's a photo?

DHolman

3:28AM | Wed, 29 January 2003

I think I'd lose the lens flare ... a little too distracting and nothing should compete with a model this pretty. I also think you're blending the skin a tad too much. It's making her look somewhat odd, almost like a painting or cartoon. Your/her posing is excellent. You've got quite a great model here. If it was me, I'd concentrate more on her and less on the effects. My $0.02

Michelle A.

10:09AM | Wed, 29 January 2003

It's so nice to see you being creative and having fun with these images. Your model is beautiful...if I was a guy I'd be drooling! I think DHolman has a point in that "less is more"...I would go more lightly on the softening... as in this pic her nose has disappeared a bit into her face... and remember the face is so important in images of people...even the erotic ones... :~)Keep up the good work!.... PS: I believe that there is a tutorial for airbrushing technique in the Photoshop forum that may be useful to you if you haven't seen it already.... It looks very much like what you are doing here, may be helpful to you in perfecting your technique.

bioserge

10:52AM | Wed, 29 January 2003

I agree with Cynlee, DHolman & Michelle A... First of all you are gonna get ALOT of hits just 'cause it's nice scattered ass around, but most won't even look at the defects. Trust me I know what I am saying have you seen my work??? Mines is Erotica also and I get more hits than comments..... Fist the nose is way gone! you gave her a Michael Jackson with that one. Second, What happend to not one but both her hands? They seemed stretched or you removed too much wrist there! she has Olive Oil from Popeye hands! Look at the wrist area and you will see what I mean... I would loose the lense flair since it is so cliche' and just paint/blur her outfit and leave her skin texture original. I am glad you started to retouch your pictures since the originals with the bed spred were a killer. I hope this helps... other than that good work.

nonjuan

3:08PM | Wed, 29 January 2003

Thanks bio and the rest of you guys... hadn't even noticed the nose. The wrists OTOH were noticed, but we decided to post it anyway. My model friend wanted to keep the lens flare and it does aid in giving it the "unreal" effect we were after. In looking at the original, most of the distracting effects were from the "smart blur". I tend to find a tool I like and get in a rut using it. As far as post work in general, it'd probably help if I spent more than a couple minutes on it. This pic went up literally an hour after it was taken. Comments like this will hopefully help me slow down a bit.

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