What once was by freedomofdesire

2D • (none) • posted on Jan 29, 2003

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what once was is now lost forever we can never retreive it or redeem ourselves for it but there is one shred of hope we do hold still it is the chance of a lifetime we must grab it before it is out of reach we will grasp it in our hand, soul and mind it is our one ticket to he roller-coaster of life we will ride it again again and again we will be the masters of our own destiny we will know ourselves and acomplish great things we will prosper in our own creation we will live and people will rejoice for our long happy life when we pass and remember our best moments

Comments (5)

freedomofdesire

9:08PM | Wed, 29 January 2003

COMMENT PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bluskank

9:42PM | Wed, 29 January 2003

You have done an wonderful job with this piece. The color theme and feeling is amazing. My only complaints are a blur effect that may have made a huge difference. I'm not sure if this is something you'd like, but try blurring the transition from color to white a tiny bit more. Also, you may get more viewings, and thusly more comments (seeing how you want comments) with a thumbnail that intices people a little more effectively. Give them an idea what your image is, this is hard to do with a very long or very wide piece. Finally, don't worry about comments, they will come, learn your own style, and work hard on it. Great work.

gallimel

12:17AM | Thu, 30 January 2003

I second what bluskank said :) this piece is intriguing, I like the light and the flashy streamings on the marks a lot. There's something valuable goin on there, just keep up the good job, and you'll see your patience will be prized :)

Legion-Khan

2:24PM | Thu, 30 January 2003

Like it...colours, forms...the words are interesting too..but the visuals really impress.

Frufffy

5:00PM | Thu, 30 January 2003

Im not a big fan of pieces with a lot of white in them, but this one i really like..the colors jump out alot n that grabs me...the colors n the blurring are good too....keep up the great work!!