Eyes Close-up by makings
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Description
As the title says, any feedback?
Anyway, I like 'em, time to move on to the rest of the model... :-)
Thanks for viewing...
Comments (3)
Iced
hmmm i don't know if you r aiming for photo realism, or as a modelling study? but your skin textures need lots of work. The eyes.... they look much much too bland, regular eyes look as if they have multiple layers of "crystals in them (i guess is the way of putting it) and it as a hmmm rouph but shiny surface also, not rouph. Hmm i can't explain this. Well here if u want a good example of good eyes, look at a person's eyes. OR go take a look at JulianJ's work, he has a bunch of eye tests, and they r reallly realistic i suggest looking at them. And the hair needs to be more stringy. I HOPE im not getting off on the wrong leg here if shes supposed to look like that. But your modelling definitly is better than what i could do!!!!!! NIce job :) also, you need more wrinkles around the eye, not old granny wrinkles but simple wrinkles that happen from the eyelid folding over itsefl ;) Average Ranking: Good
makings
Iced: Thanks for your comments - I don't think I'm going for photo-real, just a passable set of eyes (I'm so lazy!). Thanks for JulianJ's name, I will look at those closely. As for the hair, yep, it certainly needs more work. I'll add in some none-granny wrinkles around the eye, I already tried to do that on the top lid, I guess in the indent isnt' deep enough to make it look like a fold... Thanks again, Mike K.
Nellie
wonderful picture. such beautyful and lovely eyes.