Submission by Free2Dream

Bryce • (none) • posted on Feb 17, 2003

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need help improvin this...plz do...

Comments (6)

BillyM67

12:33PM | Mon, 17 February 2003

Looks good so far. Perhaps a little work on the tail and the lighting. Also, the general stance of the woman doesn't really convey how she is feeling about the situation. Can't wait to see the finished piece.

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calum5

12:42PM | Mon, 17 February 2003

Excellent to date!Maybe try a mane right down his head to his tail-or give him some horns?Also a pose playing the flute could be cool.She seems a little to relaxed considering the company!All in all execellent work and i hope you dont mind the suggestions!There only my opinions:)

Free2Dream

12:49PM | Mon, 17 February 2003

ummm... a MANE??? centaurs had mane?? i dont know!! but obviously that girl needs to b changed.. to a more frightening look.. ne tips on the lighting?? **** alvin.. you could help me in this.. do could Doublecrash...

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Doublecrash

1:42PM | Mon, 17 February 2003

Free2, I don't see too many things in which you need help, it's a pretty good image, the waterfall is very nice as in the previous posting. Yes, maybe the girl have to be a little more involved in the going-ons, but it's a nitpick.

alvinylaya

3:52PM | Mon, 17 February 2003

Wow that's a pretty cool centaur. But it creates a new task as it is in motion, then you will need a splash or water motion of some sort. I don't know how it will turn out, but maybe increasing the specularity on the skin will give it a more wet look. I think the lighting is great, I usually add a low intensity radial light to light up areas that are too dark but I think this one is fine. Personally I would probably add a couple of rocks protruding above the water and a little bit of grass to give it a more "complete/full" look, but that's just my preference. Overall, I think this is great, just a little bit of tweaking and playing around will make it perfect. The waterfalls is awesome as it is.

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woodhurst

5:08PM | Mon, 17 February 2003

Very cool idea so far--I love the waterfall as the background, and ths pose of the centaur is great. if u onw some typoe of paint program, i would maybe give some detail to the centaurs tail, or as said above, give him a mane, thatd be cool. maybe u could put some ripples around the centauts feet, or a splash of some sort. this looks great and i cant wait to see it finished!