This is a nice overall image, I like the work you did with the light cone coming through the window. But I think the texture of the tabletop is somewhat blurry and the composition of the image isn't very interesting. All the models are very well done (I particularly like the phone) they just aren't arranged all that well.

Thanks for the comments, This image wasn't created for a still, it is part of an animation hence the wonky composition. I just wanted to put something in the gallery and this is what I'm currently working on. There is till more stuff to go on the table. I agree with you about the wood texture and I am currently trying some things with different maps to give it some wear and tear, a long process due to my ancient computer and lack of knowledge.