Like the light through the blind effect.Cool!!!!

Love the idea here, the composition is great and the lighting is perfect. He must have deserved to be shot or Charley wouldn't have done it. :) Great job!

Thanks Stormi! Yeah, they must be mafiosos or something. :D

Excellent work

thanks!

I find her cloathing looks somehow odd. Neither like rubber, nor latex. Something synthetic jelly or something like that. You should also focus the eyes somewhere. She looks neither at the gunpoint, nor past it. Thats unnatural if she is supposed to blow it cool. There should be also some smoke. Silencers smoke for minutes to come. Try to furnish the room some more. It looks very naked. The lighting is also strange. It is supposed to look like a jallousie I guess, but the shadows go over the whole legth of the scene. That would have to be one very huge window! Hope I could help and I hope you dont mind criticism. Render on! :)

I agree with you on the lighting (venetian blinds) and the clothing (it is a latex texture - i haven't figured out why it doesn't look like latex). This is the first time I have used either one. her eyes were initially directed towards the silencer, i changed a few things and i apparently forgot to correct that. as for smoke, it's there - it just blends in with her attire too much. unfortunately, i lack the time to make these (and other adjustments) and repost it anytime soon. Thanks for taking a look and for your comments.

For nice smoke, look for the cigarrette prop by nerdstuff. You can hide it in the gun barrel. ^_~

Great atmosphere. Love the shadows of the blinds :)