w.i.p. by thee_kaos_child
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I can't put my finger on what's wrong with this (you know, besides having no hair, eyebrows or pupils...). Any suggestions on how to improve it?
Comments (4)
UrbanEspionage
only thing i can see, is the nose, it loosk too thin from the middle( Bridge, I think?), it should more rounded in the front than triangular. Other than that, GREAT WORK!
ariaans
Looks pretty good! I would flatten the nosebridge too and make it a bit wider on the place where it meets the forehead. I would also make the "blink-fold" a bit deeper to the outer sides, it looks not fluid to me. Good job!
spaceboy
Maybe its ok. Rotate 45deg to see if cheek bones are ok. Corners of mouth tooo sharp, Lips usually protrude more from head due to jaw bones, look at some good head from top for reference. - yup, by lips i think not just that red lines under nose, but area from nose to point of mandibula, check your mums (or someones) profile.
werewolf592
It looks very good in most respects,but to be in good human proportion the ears need to be even with the bottom of the nose(in this view).On the nose, the line looks to be too smooth-most people have a bump were the bone meets the cartilage.Still it is very good work, keep going!