Wandering Home by Kate

Mojoworld • Science Fiction • posted on May 12, 2003

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There are a few things about this pic I still don't like but I thought I'd post it anyway...maybe you have suggestions?? Thanks for viewing

Comments (16)

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tricksta

9:04AM | Mon, 12 May 2003

Nope nothing wrong except the ship looks a bit 2 shiney and new but thats my pref!! Other wise fantastic pic!!

Calanthe

9:57AM | Mon, 12 May 2003

If the upper sphere is a star, the obvious planet should be illuminated on the upper side, I think. But the pic is fantastic for colors and originality! Fantastic ship!

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bclaytonphoto

10:36AM | Mon, 12 May 2003

Really nice work Kate...

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Slav

11:02AM | Mon, 12 May 2003

Very cool pict. Great colors. There is something about the lighting on the ship and the planets, I think. May be some soft radial light under the front botomn of the ship can help.

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prutzworks

11:07AM | Mon, 12 May 2003

may be zoom in on the cruiser or make it bigger with some perpective fx

dark_thoughts

6:12PM | Mon, 12 May 2003

lose the blue dot on top planet , and possibly exprement with putting a very...and i mean VERUYYYY dim halo on the moon....the ion trail bloody kiks ASSS i love it

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Kate

8:11PM | Mon, 12 May 2003

Well thanks for the feedback. All three spheres are moons ( around the default Mojoworld planet ) and I used whatever lighting MJW gave me. But I think the lighting can be improved. I tried a larger ship but it looked very 'fake' ha! don't laugh.....anyway might try this one out again...

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Amon

6:41AM | Tue, 13 May 2003

Looks Fantastic. Well Done.

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liquidminduk

6:45AM | Tue, 13 May 2003

cool image kate, a solar flare behind the planet would look cool

Ajax

9:18PM | Tue, 13 May 2003

The balance of the composition elements looks off to me. The two moons seem to sit almost smack bang in the middle the edges. I would try to balance it out a little more, perhaps by moving the foreground moon down so that it occupies the lower left corner, while nudging the other one a little to the right. You can still keep all of that negative space in the bottom right corner, but without the moons looking so regularly positioned. The colours and textures look great.

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TheSeekerr

2:03AM | Thu, 15 May 2003

I like it. Here's my advice. Lose the gold on the ship, unless it is an ambassador or something, in which case give it and escort. Perhaps a slight motion blur on the ship would add realism, as well. I think there needs to be another object to the far right, it looks a little empty over there. Perhaps a decorative spiral galaxy?

Wahnfried1959

6:21PM | Thu, 15 May 2003

Hi Kate! I'm a fan of good SiFi and i like Your/this scene! / (i'm self had implicate a bigger space-ship like "Sulaco", or "Event Horizon".)

gab-mag

6:24AM | Sat, 17 May 2003

I think this is beautiful as is, very special atmoshpere on it! :-)

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