Finally The Storm Is Over by tom_neko
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Description
Ein erstes halbwegs herzeigbares Bild... Kommentare und Verbesserungsvorschlaege jederzeit willkommen...
Comments (4)
Ethesis
I like the signature line. Some of these are good enough to add to my webshots collection for my desktop, but I like to know where they came from. Nice light, the monochrome look helps the feel.
fat_bloater_dave
hmmmmm intersting. its a bit pixalated you might want to try rendering at a higher res (unregistered 1280x960) then resiseing it down to about 800x600. and also the couler of the rocks is a bit disterbing. to get good coluers i look at photos of the achal thing and try to get the coulour from that. but i do like the coulds.
Foxi
Als erstes flt mir auf, dadie Sonne zu frontal das Terrain beleuchtet. Das vernichtet die Strukturen des Berges, weil kaum eine Schattenbildung mlich ist. Stell mal die Sonne etwas weiter in Blickrichtung der Kamera, also so, daman praktisch gegen die Sonne schaut. Dadurch wird das Terrain etwas seitlicher angestrahlt. Somit treten die Strukturen des Terrain besser hervor. Die Rays sehen schon sehr gut aus. Und die Stimmung ist dir auch ganz gut gelungen. Weiter so!
engineer
agree with the above regarding re-sizing... this would give the surface a better look. imho the coloring is really good (I like the contrast between the b/w rock/clouds and the yellow light), gives the pic a surrealistic touch... pretty good pov, terrain, lighting and composition