On the Brink of Darkness by xDownSetx
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This is my first ever uploaded image. I hope it lives up to the standards so many of you have kept raising.
Thanx,
Joshua
Comments (4)
AuraPsi
Looks good, the models are nice. My main gripe is there is no real sense of speed (this is hard in Bryce) and the jet trails look pretty fake. Other than that, great first upload. I'm interested in those models quite a bit :)
a1000standard
Nice, nice, but what the heck is maple syrup doing coming out of those jet engines ;-)
Sacred Rose
Lets see..for a first image..its nice. But it looks like you have just placed the two crafts into a most probable collision point. The jet trails need a lot of work, and I know bryce is capable of better volumetrics. The distance between the two crafts is unrealistic. As far as trying to live up to the standards of the galleries..well, that depends on whether you believe that downmarking without reason is an acceptable form of behaviour. I assure you it isn't. If you have something constructive that could help a fellow artist, then by all means please do so.but to leave a disgusting ranking of 1 on a fellow artist's work, is simply not koscher. My suggestion for improvement would be that you work on the distance of the crafts, the jet engine emissions, and you also work on your reasons for downgrading other images. Good luck!
doppelganger
Very basic shapes. The water doesn't match the scale of the planes, the exhaust streams don't look right, the glass of the cockpits don't look right, there are some artifacts from a low density mesh on the flying wing (esp the upper edge). This is bad even for a first post.