A Vase by DeathGoth
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Description
this is a vase... I am DeathGoth... Trash the living piss out of it.... cause I know its not correctly finished... but thats life.... it should be a wip but screw the wip.... I need to put it in a scene last week.... so I guess we will call it finished..... anyway here it is... let me know what u hate about it... and lets try and be criticial not some pansy who likes to lie and say it looks great ok..... for real tell me what i think needs to be done to it...... thanx
comment post whatever....
tech side...
Made in 3ds max 5
rendered in Vray
model done by me
materials made by me
scene done by me
lights by me and Seraph135
crit by seraph135, dws,and myself....
Comments (10)
Downwrdspiral
Hey man, that glass looks nice. The coloring and minute detail on the vase (gold beads and center ring) look great. The rest of the room could use some work, its so plain and empty, the tables are too jagged, the floor mat could use some more bump, and the other materials just need some major work. They're too "Im in a hurry, these will do".
UrbanEspionage
Doesnt look like glass at all actually. Looks more like chrome, you havent made a believer out of me. I think you designed a new material actually lol j/k. Ior kinda looks off i think. yea table is jagged but thats only there to look pretty, haha
Nanat
Transparecy and reflective like glass but doesn't look like glass. yah! they right it's look like metal.
ariaans
The glass-design looks great to me, but it needs some more transparancy I think. The table is not smooth enough and the floor-texture looks a bit scaled to big to me.
tharpa
I don't have any comments, but I thought it desrved a better ranking than it got.
___PLAGUE___
this reminds me of one of those kinda perlesant glass type vasses ...looks great....if u worked on the rest of the pic ie the baground floor ect...and put this vase in a proper scene like a posh house scene and this vase is there pride of joy maybe displayed in a old antique cabnet or on a planter table of some kind...and dude u should put your work down so much !!
KAP
add more segments to the table. Try scaling the other textures in the room...the vase is interesting the texture could work if the lighting was adjusted a tad...WTF is that green thing?
jr221
I pretty much agree with everyone else. I like the vase, its modelling and material, but the rest of the scene needs work. What IS that rectangle thing to the left of the vase???
brandon_m_perkins
Death Goth.... for the table, one suggestion I would give is to add more sides. there is probably like 12 sides right now. If you jack it up to like 60, then it will give it a more appealing look. then you might want to add some textures to the table ... then move on to the floors, then to the walls, then maybe like Plague said, Quote "put this vase in a proper scene like a posh house scene and this vase is there pride of joy maybe displayed in a old antique cabnet or on a planter table of some kind..." - Plague Good modeling. Good idea. Good Luck ! 8^)
WayneZac
oooohhh.... Great model, great glass. Big fan or your long and detailed, often humorous comments :)