Una domanda difficile by ragnardarth

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This is my first post and obviously all ramarke and comment, even perfidious, will be welcome. Il is dedicated to Amadreea, a gentle young romanian lady who kicked me off to do it.

Comments (4)

pookah69

8:43AM | Tue, 10 June 2003

Good job, especially for a first post! The figure on the left needs to be more "settled" into the bench...right now, he appears to be slightly floating above. I think more shadow under the figure would help. Nice set and lighting.

DarkChilde

12:27PM | Tue, 10 June 2003

the edge of your volume light is a little too clean. try adding a map to the shadow (in grayscale) to blur it out a bit. the characters look pretty good. The stonework looks like it was pressed out of a machine. try making a few different maps for these surfaces, and then rotate the ones you reuse to get a more random effect. The edges need to be smoothed out a bit. Try using "chamfer boxes" for these stonework objects. pookah69 in right about the figures. . . they both appear to be lighter than air. . . as for the one on the left, bring the pelvis down, and have him appear to stare at her, but not into her eyes. at least make him look like he's addressing her. (I don't wanna sound cruel for all the criticism, it's an AWESOM first post, I just hope you realise I'm trying to help you, and I'm not trying to be an asshole.)

ragnardarth

4:07PM | Tue, 10 June 2003

I thank both of you. Your remarkes are absolutely right and I will use them as soon as possible in a next repost.

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