Captured by nirvy
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Description
This is my first Poser Image, I've been learning 3 weeks now and I really hope to get some tips and any comment at all, from all of you....they will be much appreciated.
Background Bryce 5
Image Poser 4
Daz Vicky
clothing altered by me Daz Fantasy Wrap
LongHair by Kozaburo
Jewellery by LP props
Lighting DNA Moonlights
Comments (7)
Solomen
Good job :p
Dash
Nice expression she really looks captured, the hair look nice how did you get it to spread in the back like that? very well done :)
bggraphics
Girl, you are by far my best studentsmile What you have grasped in the last 3 weeks is amazing !! You have the potential of becoming a renowned poser artist, and i am grateful to share my passion with you. Keep up the great work !!!! Paul Blu Gnome Graphics
SNAKEY
AWWWWWW WHO CAPTURED THE POOR BUTTERFLY!! SIGH!!! GREAT WORK NIRVY....... DON'T STOP, GO ON....
shadowblade
Simply fantastic, for a "first" effort. The pose and expression are very good. I can't wait to see how your artistry developes.
TalonGE
OK, Nirvy, let's see,... first of all, good work, and you show a good eye for composition and feel, meaning the colors, the subject matter, the action all lead to the same place. If I had any constructive criticizm, it would be detail. That's usually the thing that makes the difference between your early work and your later work,... somewhere along the way, you realize the masterpiece is in the details. So, go for a high res (or at least medium for this shot) Vicky texture, use subtle bump maps and specularity in the right places (lips for instance), go for some asymmetry in the pose (not necessarily in the piece), and work the reflections of the subject into the water and the water wall beside her. Keep at it, you've obviously got an artistic eye, just defeat the beast that is Poser, and you're there.
pjaj
Fantastic work. Wonderfully done!