What was that? by Robert0921
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Description
I was going to wait until Friday (U.S.)to post this, but was looking to see if there is anything I should fix. So, I'm posting it a little early for comments. I couldn't think of anything else to touch on it so I'll leave it up to you guys.
I like it as it is so far, I feel like it is finished. Who Knows?
Anyway, credits:
Wyrmmaster Voluptous Vicky 03 and sexy solo poses (tweaked a little). Kozaburo Long hair (painted over). Daz/Victoria 3/Icini Queen (Scabbard and belts)/Amazon Princess (And that other one, sorry I don't remember who did them.)
Bow was from freestuff as was the Celtic Broadsword.
That's it for now. Hope you enjoy.
Comments are welcome if you see something i need to work on let me know.
Thanks,
rap
Comments (12)
darksecret1
great image. i like the expressions on the girls' faces.
Patricia
Your lighting is just beautiful--the shadows of ferns and foliage really add to the 'feel' of the image and to its richness. Wish I could add a constructive critique, but it's just a lovely render all around (Poser 5 renderer, I'm assuming??) :)
Lorraine
I really like this, it has wonderful elements, I tend to spend time looking at all there is to see the poses, lighting and general set up for the scene is terrific!...great job! you got my vote..
soulscreamer
Awesome work!I always look forward to your posts:)Ya make the best scenes ever!Render on.
Sking
Well Rap,this is very impressive work! The work done on the characters from the pose and expression are excellent. Love the scene composition and the lighting is tops. Excellent alround job. ---- Scott.
prog
You put in a redhead, a blonde, and a brunette-it's done!! LOL! Fantastic-your images make me want to get Vue! Excellent work!
dolfijntjes
This is beautiful great composition love this
odf
Beautiful! I always love your renders. I wish I was as good with Vue. Great composition, colors, lighting and combination of poses, as always! You ask for things you might work on. Two things come to mind: the knees, elbows and armpits are always weak spots with poser. You already did a great job, but I think there's still room for improvement. Another thing: try soft shadows (the manual recommends 5 percent, but maybe even less for sunlight) to make the shadows of faraway foliage on bodies and tree trunks less irritating.
jwdell
Nothin wrong here, I especially like the POV, and your plants, especially in the foreground, are photoreal...
Hydra
You are one of my favorite artists. Someone has already stated the fact that they love the facial expressions, so perhaps it is just me, but look closely at the faces. Does it not strike you as sort of a cooki cutter look to them? Meaning... they all look the same. Standard, stock faces. They need blemishes or something. A mole here, scar there, tatoo perhaps? A different shape to the nose and forehead perhaps. All of the skin textures could use some blemishes or maybe a different bump map application. I am not bashing you, this is a good image. But do they not look like mannequin's in a store window? The scene itself is well put together of course. Suggestions? Raise an eyebrow, twist a mouth, gnarl some fingers and cant the shoulder hip relationships. Twist them, bend them make them look alive. Do this, and a good picture, can become great. Just my thoughts. Let me be the first to tell you, that you are far better at this than I am. So take it for what it is worth.
Robert0921
I was going for passivly alert. :) Thanks, I spend so much time on the scene I rarely spend enough time on the models. I'll work on it. So now I'm up to armpits and faces on items to fix. I don't have another texture (more realistic) are you saying to add blemishes in post? I am surprised that no one has seen the most obvious flaw....the belt is not laying correctly on the blonde in the background. (I didn't notice it either until it was up.) And, I do appreciate the comment.
Magician
Woooooh, a mighty scene with wonderful girls!!