Rhiannon by TheDarkArts
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This is my first foray into 2d art any helpful feedback and comments will be greatly appreciated.
Comments (6)
mushypea
This is nice, the hair and headpeice are lovely
GraphixDesign
I love your work, hope to see more of it. I do think that the lips and the nose need a little work. Love always Kestrell
Zargent
Great effort and what you will hopefully take as constuctive critism will be:- Forehead to short , ear to small. Shading indicating cheeks wil be helpful, else the image looks very flat. Establish a centre-line and work on that. Your nose, lips and centre of chin does not line up. I think I will stop there :) Keep on Pencilling ! Best Wishes, Zargent.
TheDarkArts
thanxfor the constructive criticism, As Isaid this was myfirst attempt in about 10 years at drawing seriously, just wanted to see if it worked well..and even with the imperfections I like it,Thankx everyone!
gallimel
I woudl also add that it needs some shades on face and that the hair are too lackin variation to look real.. but penciling is a practice, so I am sure with training you will soon get better and better :) keep it up and enjoy your trials :)
DSDragon
Damn good return after a ten-year poofle from drawing, although I do have to agree with Zargent. Also, seeing as you have a more anime-type influence... Get the How To Draw Manga books. They are not always easy to find, and definitely not the cheapest How-To books out there, but they help out a lot for figuring out tricks and bits! Keep it up! :)