ss wip by graywolf
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Description
First... i'm not a fascist or anything, this will be part of a project about the holocaust so no flaming me please! Your comments on how to make this better are welcomed.
Comments (4)
VOID
The hat and the collar are perfect, but the head needs a bit more refinement. You should try to work out the bone structure under the skin and the eyebrows should not be a consistant line. The mouth looks a bit strange, too. You should either make the mouth bigger and the chin stronger, or move the mouth up a bit. The would look better if they were a bit shinyer. They look very lifeless ike this. All in all I am eager to see the final version. Its exceptionally good for a work in progress.
punmaster
This guy certainly looks German. I like the skin shader, but I think some more blemishes and varying tones (subtley done of course) would make it look excellent. I have to agree with VOID that mouth needs a bit more work.
Moebius87
Stunning work so far. You might want to check out the work over in the Character Creators Forum. They will have tons of tips and pointers on how to really crank this model up a notch.
illicit
Very good work so far, i want to see more...