GIRL LVI (WIP) by Pontigary

2D • (none) • posted on Jul 13, 2003

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One more wip... Though WIPs seem awkward and funny
(really strange how portraits change when all
the deatil appear at last not to mention shading)
Your constructive criticism is very valuable
and appreciated highly, dear friends. I noticed
that if a WIP is published the final arttwork is
not so popular, but Your early comments are more
important for me than the number of views)
Thank You for viewing and commenting,
Graphically Yours,
-Anthony

Comments (3)

gallimel

1:12PM | Sun, 13 July 2003

your wisdom in this approach pleases me infinitely :) You're one of the few that takes what this site is really for :) So here I go with notes... I like teh overhall so far, but in a way the eyes are of "one flavour" and teh mouth of another. Like the eyes are to mesmerize, but the grin of the mouth resembles kinda of a sarchastic laughing and so the entire impression is almost like Joker, sinisterly smiling lady. Try to close her mouth a bit, to make the whole expression more ... sensual and less grinning :) Hugs :)

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ShadowWind

12:35AM | Mon, 14 July 2003

Great painting and I love the eyes in this one...As to criticism, I think a bit more shadows on the mouth from the intense lighting, but other than that...

Whitemouse

3:40PM | Wed, 16 July 2003

I agree with gallimel and shadowWind the eyes are great but the lips and teeth are not shaded enough. The mouth looks flats. You have great skills now with pencils and I am going to learn a lot from you. Hugs, Sandra