The Private (A story) by Vestmann
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"Now you're not planning on drinking that alone, are you Captain..." That soft voice broke my perfectly justified thoughts of depression.
I rolled the whiskey in my glass before I looked up.
She stood there like a flower in a graveyard. Private Everson. Or "Hell's Private Thunder" as I'd heard her platoon call her. I almost didn
Comments (4)
T.Rex
Nice image but even better story accompanying it. War is hell and actually no place anyone, male or female. But, not everyone gets killed or maimed. Usually a unit withdraws after 10-15% casualties. The text really conveys a lot of feeling many have in the day before the battle situation. Nice going.
MiKo0
Gotta agree with T.Rex here Petur. Those words are stunning! Convey so much emotion and feeling in the viewer. The image is wonderfully done too. Character looks great as does the post too. Great work buddy ;)
FranzaEmma
Where ever there are word there is an image behind it... its even greater to make an image and write its own words.. not a story but few lines that make you forget that its just a picture and feel the difference the second time you look at it, after you reed the words. yours truly FranzaEmma
smohara
Love her pose and her outfit, well done sir!