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Description
LYCANTHROPY
by
DON STREETER
A full moon
Cooks a piece of my brain,
As sweat rolls into my eyes.
Crying out in pain,
Is there no sympathy
For those who go insane.
Comments (1)
lavender
I liked how the poem and the image matched each other. Both are very stricking and memorable. I have two tiny suggestions. First when I read the poem aloud I stumbled a bit on the first three lines, maybe the rhythm could be smoother? And second -- the moon looked too flat somehow. Or maybe it's just me? Anyway, I really like the compositon of the image: the shapes, and the play of lights. Very Nice. :)