INCOMING! by ShockWave
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Description
well i think this is my best art so far! please tell what i can do to improve it thx guys.
Comments (2)
tesign
Not sure if its going up or coming down. If those are cannon barrels, I assume its front of the spacecraft (looks like retracting support pods though if its coming down. The camera view makes it to low to the ground....give it a little more height by either scaling down the model or moving it up higher. Motion blur is optional however some sort of movement or energy has to be done. A misty like heat trail and some churning dust from the ground helps. May be you want to move the craft higher and have it bank to your right (facing you) and tilting its' front up a bit showing the base. Looks for dramatic. Some 'seasoning'...:) weathering I mean on the craft and dirt up the place a bit (terrain) Adding some undulation to the ground would be nice. - IMHO of course.
ShockWave
thx for the help man. it looks very plane now u sai that i shall fix it all up :D