Thank You - Dream Saga 02 by erviin

Writers • Romance • posted on Aug 06, 2003

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***WARNING***
Lousy Writing Ahead
You've been warned

Thank You

Just some moments have past,
Eternal seconds of lust.
No physical contact needed,
Nothing more than words to hear.
Infinite feelings of pleasure,
Feelings of shared leisure.
Everlasting thoughts from a dreamer,
Rising the spirit of the reader.
Solely words, nothing else needed,
Understanding simply found
Not pleaded.

ErViIn

This is quite messy, so for those of you who will take a moment to read it, I'll give a brief explanation to try and make it more clear.
This writing is about something I've been reading, short writings that take just a minute to read, but that I've been reading again and again.
Hence, the reader would be me, the pleasure refers to how I felt reading, and the dreamer would be the one writing what I've been reading.
If you see something that looks like coincidence, think again, it is not.
To you who will find your self in these words, I hope not to offend you, for nothing is farther than my intention. It's my way to say thank you.

By no means I consider this a good work, it

Comments (2)

JenniferSun

3:45PM | Wed, 06 August 2003

Thank you... uuuh, I'm nearly blushing :) No, just thank you for being you, you are a really great person and I am so glad that my destiny was so friendly to let me meet a person like you... A person who I feel the first time that I am not the only dreamer in this world. And that I've found someone to share my thoughts. That's just what I wanted to tell you here. Have an inspiring and wonderful day.

)

erviin

11:48AM | Tue, 12 August 2003

This was in Religious/Spiritual category because I could not find a category into wich it fitted, but I think it really didn't belong into a category where religion is mentioned... So I changed it to Romance where I think it fits best... however it remains a spiritual thing... May be there should be a categoty for Spiritual Romance? ;)