Bad landing by ralfetas
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Description
Sorry... no comments to say. I just want to know what you people think about this image :-).
Comments (8)
camaro
Quite realistic! but, erm, the smoke could blend in with the scene a bit more and would there really be that much intact of the craft when it's smashed onto a rock/island like that? Perhaps break of the far wing and stick it sideways in the water? Needs more debris lying about. I like!
shadowdragonlord
Well it's a great idea, I love the burnaway sections of the 'craft. A bouple of tips (which you may discard as you feel necessary, of course!) : The smoke : lower the density a bit, it will give it a softer and yet more violent look. The island/water : perhaps a crustier rock texture for the landmass, but the water looks like a plastic sheet, static and unmoving. Try adding some spray, or surf, or waves... Lastly, the DOF blur : Unless this aircraft is tiny, you would never have that much focal difference. Depth of Field should be used to define an image's scale, not just focus. And on landscape-sized images, it's not only unrealistic and impossible, but unnecessary... Just my opinions, keep rendering though, it's gonna be awesome!
pakled
any landing you can walk away from is a good one.
alvinylaya
Whoa, first thing I noticed was the black smoke, it looks awesome! Maybe thick in the bottom and thinner as it moves up. I love the lighting here! I agree about making a few splashes or turbulence in the water. Overall it's a fantastic job!
ralfetas
Tanks people for the comments! I am makeing this scene again with this opinions. Soon i will repost :-). And Tanks again!
Kate
I would change the blur at the bottom right because it makes the landscape look like its floating which it isnt but sort of looks like that....will be a fantastic pic when you do more :)
lgp692000
This is a fantastic start if you are to repost. The POV is perfect and that chunk missing from the wing is killer. Cant wait to see what you do to it now.
shayhurs
Anything you can walk away from is considered a successful landing...