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Bad landing

Bryce Aviation posted on Aug 08, 2003
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Sorry... no comments to say. I just want to know what you people think about this image :-).

Comments (8)


camaro

10:44AM | Fri, 08 August 2003

Quite realistic! but, erm, the smoke could blend in with the scene a bit more and would there really be that much intact of the craft when it's smashed onto a rock/island like that? Perhaps break of the far wing and stick it sideways in the water? Needs more debris lying about. I like!

shadowdragonlord

5:51PM | Fri, 08 August 2003

Well it's a great idea, I love the burnaway sections of the 'craft. A bouple of tips (which you may discard as you feel necessary, of course!) : The smoke : lower the density a bit, it will give it a softer and yet more violent look. The island/water : perhaps a crustier rock texture for the landmass, but the water looks like a plastic sheet, static and unmoving. Try adding some spray, or surf, or waves... Lastly, the DOF blur : Unless this aircraft is tiny, you would never have that much focal difference. Depth of Field should be used to define an image's scale, not just focus. And on landscape-sized images, it's not only unrealistic and impossible, but unnecessary... Just my opinions, keep rendering though, it's gonna be awesome!

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pakled

7:51PM | Fri, 08 August 2003

any landing you can walk away from is a good one.

alvinylaya

10:06PM | Fri, 08 August 2003

Whoa, first thing I noticed was the black smoke, it looks awesome! Maybe thick in the bottom and thinner as it moves up. I love the lighting here! I agree about making a few splashes or turbulence in the water. Overall it's a fantastic job!

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ralfetas

12:31AM | Sat, 09 August 2003

Tanks people for the comments! I am makeing this scene again with this opinions. Soon i will repost :-). And Tanks again!

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Kate

7:51AM | Sat, 09 August 2003

I would change the blur at the bottom right because it makes the landscape look like its floating which it isnt but sort of looks like that....will be a fantastic pic when you do more :)

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lgp692000

9:08AM | Sat, 09 August 2003

This is a fantastic start if you are to repost. The POV is perfect and that chunk missing from the wing is killer. Cant wait to see what you do to it now.

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shayhurs

1:44AM | Tue, 01 May 2007

Anything you can walk away from is considered a successful landing...


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