W.I.P Weeping for what was by nemo
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Description
just thought I'd try and get some helpfull comments to help me finish this. let me know what you think.
Comments (5)
Firebirdz
Comments: love the POV. Make the image bigger. The middle column looks missing. Don't change the forest background. Very beautifully added. I think it might make a more captivating image with the figure nearer the front or another figure near the front, unless the purpose of the image is to really show the scene.
Artzy
Wow! Very nice, and so much to see...
T.Rex
The lighting in background is brighter than foreground- tone it down or increase foreground lighting to avoid imbalance. How long time since "what was"? If not long, then less "aged" look on the ruins would make less of an anachronism between the present "ancient" look and the title. Crying over the distant past is less of an impact than over a recently experienced loss. Figure is OK- I had to look for it, but the ruins are large= good. I like this. Good work.
Trudy
I tend to agree with all of the above, wish the render was bigger, the emphasis seems to be in the scene in which I think is beautiful and creates the mood that it looks like you were going for. Really got to appreciate the depth you have composed, as far as the womans pose and placement I am undecided, she is difficult to see clearly, maybe a little closer, but what a great looking scene. It would be real interesting to see what other people would do with it if it was made available. Excellent rating!
squeeka
I like this and agree with all of the above. The lighting in the background does need to be a bit less and I think the figure needs to be brought more to the forefront of the image :) Very nice work here though, I can't wait to see what the finished image looks like :) hugz-Jen