fregatte A-2751 by sokon
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Description
this is my third work,hope u like it
please write your suggestions to improve my work
ps:sorry my english^s really poor...
Comments (11)
Kirl
Nice...! Meaby a bit more light from the front.
Drakath
I like the design of that spaceship. It's really good. The picture is also ok. But the right side is much to dark. You can simply cut off that part...
QP
The spaceship is really great, just need a bit more lighting in the main pic! But great ship design!
kromekat
looks good to me - very Aliens type hardware - I'd suggest giving it a brighter specularity to really make the highlights glow, and maybe add more plate detail/make them sharper edges than at poresent - it will help with the scale. I like the black space to the right personally.
jkinnikin
I think it's quite good...great model design
Max-UK
love the design.. love the texturing...would be nice to see it in a sun flare to show up the ship a tad more,buts thats me being a nit picking novice with as much artistic talent as a mars bar ;)))
jsa2001
Nice design, maybe add some greeblies to the ship for finer detail and some window or navigation lights here and there. I would also crop the final image or change the composition slightly.Ther're a few anomolies on the planet texture also. Good work and keep it up and over time it will be up there with Draketh's and Kromekat's sifi images.
LCGuy
The modelling and texturing is very well done!
3D_Explorer
Yea, I like the modeling. I think the problem lies in the lighting. I also don't think that the planet's blur should invade the line of sight to the bottom of the ship. -- 3d_e
sokon
thanks for all the comments. to explain the lighting:i tried to give the impression that the sun is right rising beyond venus,thats also why one side is pretty dark and the light is invading the line of sight a bit(visible light..),but maybe i should try to find another solution for that.. anyway thanks for all your comments and your help.
korborak
I really like this design! I think that you should remodel it and refine all the details. Especialy the paneling. You should also sharpen the planet's texture in Photoshop and increase the bumps. Very nice work :)