Free Speech Chapter One by jarm
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Chapter 1 - The City
I can feel the city.
It's been five years since I was last here, even now, sitting in my favourite
coffee bar, the way people move, the shadows falling down from the skycrapers
all around, I know that nothing has changed. The portions are smaller, the price
a little higher, but the city remains. I've been back for two hours and it's
like I had never been away. That's where the first bad feeling kicks in, I've
spent five years isolated, away from the noise, the mix messages of this dirty,
downtrodden and desperate place and the moment I step into the familiar routine
of this coffee shop, the place where I made the decision to walk away. The
feeling isn't worry, concern or fear like I would've expected. If I had to put
assigned a feeling to the sensation, it would be depression. Five years, and
nobody has made a difference, nobody has changed anything, it's heads down, keep
it simple, just like it always was. Just like it always will be with everybody.
There was a time I believed differently, a time when I figured I could change
things, make a difference somehow to these people, but it became clear they
didn't want any help, they didn't want to understand the depths of their
situation, the reason why this city is such a trap, such a place.
Sometimes I envy them, but only sometimes.
My name is Eldin Cale, the last time I was here, in the city, it nearly killed
me, this time, there's a good chance it'll finish the job, but I had to come
back, at least for a while, because of Sasha.
Sasha wasn't the reason I left, but she had been involved back then, writing for
the networks, as I had been years ago, required an assistance, somebody to trawl
through the newsfeeds, websites and information dealers, when you went live with
a story, you needed the ammunition to make sure that you nailed it, given the
sheer numbers of newsfeeds and how most of the population had them on ten
seconds rotation, you had those few seconds to grab a viewer, ten seconds to
make them sit up straight and stretch for the remote or to commit the energy to
tell the autochanger to hold on the channel.
Somedays it was quite a challenge.
However, Sasha was always good at getting what I needed, even when the networks
through me off the air and forced to go underground, Sasha stuck with me, when I
left, it was her and only her who tried to get me to reconsider and stay, to
fight on. Perhaps she had been right, I was back here again and it hardly seemed
like five minutes.
Sasha was nineteen when I left the city, I'd recruited her from one of the
underground feedsites, the ones that hacked airtime on the public channels
during the ad breaks. I had heard her stories, read her articles on the web and
she had talent, she hit stories and got closer to the truth than anybody else I
had known, I knew journalists four times her age who didn't understand what she
knew. After I left she got picked up by one of the major networks, as much as
they hated me, they appreciated her talents. I'm not sure how she convinced them
that she was on their side, but during the newscasts she had been the city
reporter for NewsCorp, outside of the newscasts, she switched handles on the web
and the feedsites and kept writing, using what she found out on hours to get the
truth out off the main networks. It's tricky to get the city broadcasts when
you're two thousand miles in a dense forest, but enough satelite dishes meant I
got hold of what I could, and there were always transcripts available on the
net, she hadn't lost her skills, the network tried to tame her no doubt, but
Sasha knew how to play the game.
I guess she must have felt betrayed when I left, I suppose I couldn't have
blamed her, I couldn've stuck it out, I'd gone up against the corporations many
times before, death threats had hardly been a new thing either, but, when one of
those threats kicks your door down and leaves you little choice but to send it
thirty-six stories down to the pavement, you tend to evaluate the situation in a
different light.
Sasha would kick my ass if she knew I was thinking that.
The coffee bar was bustling, it always did good business, it was a good place to
sit and be lost in the crowd, too much going on, too much movement in such a
crowded place to notice anybody. It made a great vantage point for watching the
city, it was two storeys up, overlooking an automatic pavement heading down the
street towards the Plaza district, beneath it, the steady stream of vehicles
drifted by next to the busy sidewalks. You could see the corporate district in
the distance, a huge looming skyline of gleaming white and glass, on a clear day
the giant logos of the corporations could be seen, at night, their illuminations
dominated the sky, even this far away.
The city was formed by the corporations, governed by a board of directors made
up from the major corporations, NeuroPharm, NewsCorp, Blue Technologies,
InfraTech. It was meant to be the city that worked, sold on the idea of no
administration by self-serving politicians. What the population got instead was
the bottom-line ethos of a group of multi-billion pound companies. Instead of a
group of self serving politicians you could vote out for another group every
five years, the city ended up with a board of directors that had stayed
relatively unchanged for over twenty years. Needless to say, it was a
journalist
Comments (2)
jarm
First chapter of a story I am writing, I am actually going away from home for a week in order to try and knuckle down and write it. Any comments on this first chapter is welcome and appreciated.
macsavers
Outside of one line being a run-on fragment, I liked it very much. Good job of leaving a teaser at the end. The imagery and feeling of the piece is well setup. Well done.