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Her name is Audi

New Artists (none) posted on Apr 18, 2001
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Hi everyone. This is my 3rd render since I've started this whole 3D jive. I'm not satisfied with this picture. I think it's missing something so I need all the comments I can get so I can improve. Thanks, Peace!

Comments (6)


mqshocker

11:34PM | Wed, 18 April 2001

very well done Chris,you are doing better... Shocker......

Cheryle

11:42PM | Wed, 18 April 2001

Great post! More! ;) you get a 10 for being orig ;) and trying a difficult pix ;)

AceC

11:49PM | Wed, 18 April 2001

Looks promising. I like the use of a full environment, and the outfit/props/textures. However, you do need a bit of work on the pose, as was mentioned in chat...

darchangel

8:45AM | Thu, 19 April 2001

I like the pose and the pic, although her hair should be flowing around a bit considering that shes upside down and gravity should be doing its work. Great pic.

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cog_cog

5:28PM | Sat, 21 April 2001

Good pose.. I agree with Cheryle, hope you do more. Perhaps if you create another light and shine it in the direction of the gun that is pointed at us.. right now I cannot see the guy very well, it looks like she just has 1 gun. You could add some movement lines, but that would make it more like a comic book, it would depend on the style you develope. It looks like she might hit her head on that one car, not sure that is the tension you want to focus on. I know what would for sure make this better- if that gun that is pointed at us was fireing. She is jumping the gap between to cars to shoot at what is between right? And then have some shells falling to the ground.

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zulaan

12:23PM | Mon, 06 May 2002

Nice pose, this reminds me the "matrix" movie, very cool !


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