just visiting by TRAVISB

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just visiting the 2d gallery as im still a begginer hoping to get some tips on how to make my lines not so shakey (smooth ) i use photoshop but no mater what i do my lines are still not smmooth I used a comicbook to as a refrence to look at for lightiing and have been studying jtron, febburs and supafly trying to get better any photoshop tips are greatly apreciated thank you !

Comments (19)

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Ironbear

8:52PM | Fri, 20 April 2001

This is primo. No tips, I'm still a CG 2D beginner myself.

ideaflo

8:59PM | Fri, 20 April 2001

looks great mon

macsavers

9:24PM | Fri, 20 April 2001

Who says lines have to be straight. Your work is fantastic. Let the shakey lines be your trademark and make more of these.

9:39PM | Fri, 20 April 2001

I would suggest a little bit of a gaussian blur , maybe lower the opacity of the white lines , Youre painting is excellent :-)

NefariousIntellect

10:20PM | Fri, 20 April 2001

I like this... It's "almost" perfect. I think that you could use a little bit more in the background, otherwise this pic is great. Love the paintjob! :)

Heart'Song

10:36PM | Fri, 20 April 2001

I really think it's great! I'm a CGA beginner too, but I have a good eye for what works and what doesn't. You'll be where you want to be in no time, if this posting is representative of your stuff. Good going!

KattMan

11:07PM | Fri, 20 April 2001

Bet I know what comic book you were referencing. Looks just like Sara Pezzini from Witchblade during the Turner days. Good job!

frogman

11:39PM | Fri, 20 April 2001

What a beautiful piece of work..! If you had not said anything about the lines, who would notice?..I think it's absolutely great the way it is......

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februus

11:57PM | Fri, 20 April 2001

Nice work TRAVISB-cool!

RadArt

12:41AM | Sat, 21 April 2001

Great work! ;-)

SHiVER

3:58AM | Sat, 21 April 2001

wow!!!

Supafly

5:47AM | Sat, 21 April 2001

Really good, if you I can send you a tutorial...just give me your email address

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Dark Reflections

8:01AM | Sat, 21 April 2001

"Fantastic picture (for a beginner). This could be in a comic book...Bravo...Carry on."

kitana

10:24AM | Sat, 21 April 2001

Oh my god, I am so jealous! She is fantastic (especially that I just saw the 2D vs completely colored)! Awesome, Travis!

TRAVISB

11:19AM | Sat, 21 April 2001

WOW thank you ! everyone

swfreeman

4:52PM | Sat, 21 April 2001

hmm...great...sarah pezzini?

nick2k

9:38PM | Sat, 21 April 2001

great stuff, you could always use a vector program to create your outlines then save them out as a bmp so you can colour it. But the type of line you have adds to your style which is kinda cool.

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ralphmanis

8:39AM | Sun, 22 April 2001

Great Pic! I like the rough hand drawn look it works perfectly with this type of art! If trully smooth lines are what you need try the pen tool and stroke the path with whatevery you choose.

MrWyatt

4:01AM | Wed, 16 May 2001

First I want to say, I like your stile. Dont change a thing work it out instead. Straight lines allways look CG and that takes a lot of life from the art of drawing. Second, sad you didnt let us rank that nice pic. I would give it a straight 9. And I`m Hard in ranking, hehe. Keep up the good work. :-)