A Quiet Passage by RobinBanks

2D • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Sep 06, 2003

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A sad poem I wrote in a time of personal loss and tragedy.

Comments (20)

gallimel

1:42AM | Sun, 07 September 2003

it's soulful.. and touching. Sorry for your hard times... this would alsobelong well to the writers gallery :)

Jaden

11:10AM | Mon, 08 September 2003

nice poem godo job

kusanagi73

12:48AM | Tue, 09 September 2003

It is full of images. I can see it.

jeweldragon

9:37PM | Sat, 13 September 2003

OHHHHH this is just incredible you should try to make an image of this then put the poem under it :)

i0n

2:01PM | Thu, 25 September 2003

Well written, very descriptive. You should write more....

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Stacey_73

2:28AM | Sat, 18 October 2003

Sweet and sad all at once. Very touching work! floating ovation

boumboum34

2:28AM | Sat, 18 October 2003

This is definitely one of the more, er, UNUSUAL image I've seen! Hehe! There! I've commented! I didn't say it'd be a GOOD comment!

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Avalonia

2:38AM | Sat, 18 October 2003

Wonderfully visual work in words Robin. I hope you post more of your poetry so I can read it. Regards, Avalonia

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JVRenderer

12:54AM | Sun, 19 October 2003

It's very well written. A bit sad, but that's the nature of this poem.

Kai-

7:57PM | Tue, 18 November 2003

wha... the fuck that "poem" made no soding sense whatsoever, i mean wtf lone gulls and old blokes.. sand and kissing.. sand..ew.. theres that beach fetish again.... frilly pink pantys and eww.. im gonna be sick

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DigitalDreamer

2:44PM | Tue, 16 December 2003

If it makes no sense to you kai, you've never lost someone you loved.

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TheBlindBat

1:04AM | Wed, 31 December 2003

Oh, hun, that's so touching and emotional. I never would that thought that to come from you. You mix the joy and pain of love so well, too. Very lovely...

AngelSterling

10:29AM | Fri, 02 January 2004

this very touching....you should write more

mushypea

2:27PM | Mon, 09 August 2004

Kai, you need your head seeing to you FOOL! This is a very good poem.....well done!

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ObsidianLogic

2:01PM | Mon, 30 August 2004

well i' m glad i got them to come up ..lovely work feel free to stop by and read my work i got no thumbs eather

shortgrey

3:03PM | Fri, 26 November 2004

My tears drift away to this stream of Light you're spreading, Jenna.....hugs.......SG

Akire

11:47AM | Wed, 01 December 2004

lovely poem Robin, quite full of emotion and well protrayed. there's no need to render an image of this, the one in my mind is quite detailed from your words.

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